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long tail - short poem

I put the letters in a box and shook them till they fell awoke to find a crooked poem written by a mouse that couldn't spell

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Don Iannone

Date: 3/25/2024 7:17:00 AM

Hi John, love this! Sometimes I feel like my poems are just that. Have a great day. Don.

Ink Empress

Date: 3/24/2024 9:30:00 AM

I would like to actually try this! That would be fun. Haha. Crooked poem lol gosh! You always make me laugh

Michael Tor

Date: 3/22/2024 10:49:00 PM

Lol John thanks for the smile...

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/22/2024 5:21:00 PM

now this is witty and humorous! I liked: 'a crooked poem written by a mouse that couldn't spell.' I would ask you not let that mouse loose in Milton Creek--don't want it in our bakery! :-)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/22/2024 2:14:00 PM

Ha, ha, ha, ha, ha. Love it, John. So uniquely yours. ~ Gershon

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/22/2024 2:11:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your creative/fun "mouse" write. Guess you need to teach your mouse how to spell. I bet your mouse can do better then AI... Have a wonderful/fun weekend writing away..........

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 3/22/2024 12:07:00 PM

This is cute. Try it on children, too. I like the animal addition on the end.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 3/22/2024 9:32:00 AM

Fun whimsy, John! So creative! Blessings!

Di11y Da11y

Date: 3/22/2024 6:00:00 AM

Cute!