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Long Live Love

How does one ever describe love It is such an intangible thing There are billions of people in the world But there are very few that cross our paths However, we know instantly When that special person pops onto the scene A certain chemistry grabs hold of us The hair on the back of our neck Stands up and lets us know This person is very different from all the rest We have trouble sleeping at night We drive 40 mph in a 60 mph zone We lose concentration doing the simplest things Am I getting close??? There are very few people who haven't experienced This totally overpowering sensation That takes over our whole being I can honestly say I have only experienced it once I've never forgotten it and never will This is as close to describing love As I can ever hope to... long live love! © Jack Ellison 2014

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Date: 10/3/2014 11:58:00 AM
Love is like that totally overpowering sensation you get to scratch an itch. When you're finally sealed in your astronaut suit. Or that over whelming need to go to the bathroom when your new snow suit is zipped up and you just stepped out doors!Or it's like an all day lollipop at dinner time, that you haven't finished savoring yet. Who wanted dinner any way? Or that live dangerously feeling you get when you tell Dragon that you're not writing about him today. Now THAT can get intense! LOL
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Jack Ellison
Date: 10/4/2014 8:07:00 AM
Ahh! So you know love too, I see... we're both lovers, not fighters! LOL XXX
Date: 10/3/2014 8:17:00 AM
Cathie sure is a lucky lady Jack - wonderful write my friend:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Jack Ellison
Date: 10/3/2014 8:43:00 AM
Oh Jan, Jan, Jan! Thanks a whole big bunch, dear friend! Huggsies, Bro XOX
Date: 10/3/2014 7:47:00 AM
It is a great feeling, I have loved many times and love the feeling of it. Your poem is an excellent description of it! Well said sweetie :)
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Jack Ellison
Date: 10/3/2014 7:51:00 AM
YOU are the sweetie, my dear Casarah!!! Where have you been all my life????? Huggsies, Jack XXXXXXX

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