Home » Poems » Tim Ryerson » Long-Leaf Pines

Long-Leaf Pines

muddy, dying pond green confronts cloudless blue sky my dog sniffs and snoops

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Kim Merryman

Date: 6/16/2015 10:59:00 AM

Great visual, Tim! Congrats on your placement! Love, Kim

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/15/2015 8:41:00 PM

Nice win, Luv ~LINDA~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/14/2015 11:24:00 AM

oh that is a fun one, the ending of it!! congrats, Tim.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 6/14/2015 5:22:00 AM

good haiku Tim last line is gross lol congrats on placing hugs

Skat A

Date: 6/13/2015 9:03:00 PM

Tim. Congratulations, thank you for the Picture Perfect Haiku **SKAT**

Tim Ryerson
Date: 6/14/2015 3:23:00 PM

Thanks SKAT and if I haven't said so before, thanks for taking the time to read and comment on my old poems...

Skat A

Date: 5/26/2015 11:59:00 PM

enjoying nature one way or the other

Joyce Johnson

Date: 4/1/2014 6:08:00 PM

Great haiku. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 4/1/2014 2:29:00 AM

congratulations Tim xx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/1/2014 2:03:00 AM

Wonderful take on the green theme, congrats on the fine win, tim

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/31/2014 9:39:00 PM

TIM, AWESOME WIN..... CONGRATULATIONS..... LUV~ LINDA

Nicole Sharon Brown

Date: 11/17/2009 6:09:00 AM

This reminds me of home the region where I grew up is known for their beautiful pines and the big dogs that snoop around! LOL!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/8/2009 5:17:00 PM

Perfect picture! Second line a winner. BG

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/8/2009 10:53:00 AM

Very beautiful haiku, Tim! I love the way the dogs seem as intrigued by the reader by this image. Wonderful work and a favorite for me! Love, Carolyn

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 11/8/2009 10:52:00 AM

nice! a wonderful Haiku Tim. Thanks for the visit and kind comments also ;)

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 11/8/2009 3:57:00 AM

Tim, I really love this haiku. I can see a floppy eared dog sniffing around the edges of a small pond that reflects the surrounding pines and clouds above. Excellent imagery. Lovingly, Dane Soupmail