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Long-Leaf Pines

muddy, dying pond
green confronts cloudless blue sky
my dog sniffs and snoops

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Kim Merryman

Date: 6/16/2015 10:59:00 AM

Great visual, Tim! Congrats on your placement! Love, Kim

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/15/2015 8:41:00 PM

Nice win, Luv ~LINDA~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/14/2015 11:24:00 AM

oh that is a fun one, the ending of it!! congrats, Tim.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 6/14/2015 5:22:00 AM

good haiku Tim last line is gross lol congrats on placing hugs

SKAT A

Date: 6/13/2015 9:03:00 PM

Tim. Congratulations, thank you for the Picture Perfect Haiku **SKAT**

Tim Ryerson
Date: 6/14/2015 3:23:00 PM

Thanks SKAT and if I haven't said so before, thanks for taking the time to read and comment on my old poems...

SKAT A

Date: 5/26/2015 11:59:00 PM

enjoying nature one way or the other

The LYRIC

Date: 4/3/2014 8:34:00 PM

Tim, you are a season and skilled writer and you have put together a wonderful Haiku.. Congrats on your win!

Joyce Johnson

Date: 4/1/2014 6:08:00 PM

Great haiku. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 4/1/2014 2:29:00 AM

congratulations Tim xx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/1/2014 2:03:00 AM

Wonderful take on the green theme, congrats on the fine win, tim

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/31/2014 9:39:00 PM

TIM, AWESOME WIN..... CONGRATULATIONS..... LUV~ LINDA

Nicole Sharon Brown

Date: 11/17/2009 6:09:00 AM

This reminds me of home the region where I grew up is known for their beautiful pines and the big dogs that snoop around! LOL!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/8/2009 5:17:00 PM

Perfect picture! Second line a winner. BG

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/8/2009 10:53:00 AM

Very beautiful haiku, Tim! I love the way the dogs seem as intrigued by the reader by this image. Wonderful work and a favorite for me! Love, Carolyn

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 11/8/2009 10:52:00 AM

nice! a wonderful Haiku Tim. Thanks for the visit and kind comments also ;)

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 11/8/2009 3:57:00 AM

Tim, I really love this haiku. I can see a floppy eared dog sniffing around the edges of a small pond that reflects the surrounding pines and clouds above. Excellent imagery. Lovingly, Dane Soupmail