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Long-Leaf Pines

muddy, dying pond
green confronts cloudless blue sky
my dog sniffs and snoops

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/16/2015 10:59:00 AM
Great visual, Tim! Congrats on your placement! Love, Kim
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Date: 6/15/2015 8:41:00 PM
Nice win, Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 6/14/2015 11:24:00 AM
oh that is a fun one, the ending of it!! congrats, Tim.
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Date: 6/14/2015 5:22:00 AM
good haiku Tim last line is gross lol congrats on placing hugs
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Date: 6/13/2015 9:03:00 PM
Tim. Congratulations, thank you for the Picture Perfect Haiku **SKAT**
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Date: 6/14/2015 3:23:00 PM
Thanks SKAT and if I haven't said so before, thanks for taking the time to read and comment on my old poems...
Date: 5/26/2015 11:59:00 PM
enjoying nature one way or the other
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Date: 4/3/2014 8:34:00 PM
Tim, you are a season and skilled writer and you have put together a wonderful Haiku.. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 4/1/2014 6:08:00 PM
Great haiku. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/1/2014 2:29:00 AM
congratulations Tim xx
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Date: 4/1/2014 2:03:00 AM
Wonderful take on the green theme, congrats on the fine win, tim
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Date: 3/31/2014 9:39:00 PM
TIM, AWESOME WIN..... CONGRATULATIONS..... LUV~ LINDA
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Date: 11/17/2009 6:09:00 AM
This reminds me of home the region where I grew up is known for their beautiful pines and the big dogs that snoop around! LOL!
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Date: 11/8/2009 5:17:00 PM
Perfect picture! Second line a winner. BG
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Date: 11/8/2009 10:53:00 AM
Very beautiful haiku, Tim! I love the way the dogs seem as intrigued by the reader by this image. Wonderful work and a favorite for me! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/8/2009 10:52:00 AM
nice! a wonderful Haiku Tim. Thanks for the visit and kind comments also ;)
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Date: 11/8/2009 3:57:00 AM
Tim, I really love this haiku. I can see a floppy eared dog sniffing around the edges of a small pond that reflects the surrounding pines and clouds above. Excellent imagery. Lovingly, Dane Soupmail
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Date: 11/7/2009 11:43:00 PM
What A Beautiful, Peaceful Scene... Your Setting for this Haiku is Superb ... MoonBee
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Date: 11/7/2009 9:58:00 PM
Well-written haiku! Great imagery. Accurate 5-7-5 syllable count. Milt
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Date: 11/7/2009 5:49:00 PM
Good use of imagery in the first two lines. The last line left me smiling. Thanks for sharing this day brightener. Karen
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Date: 11/7/2009 3:43:00 PM
Nice Haiku Tim...Enjoyed...Marty
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Date: 11/7/2009 3:37:00 PM
Nice words Tim, great poem. Pam
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Date: 11/7/2009 3:03:00 PM
Our dogs have a lot in common! This made me smile..! ps...you inspired my Fingal's Cave haiku, yesterday :)
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Date: 11/7/2009 1:59:00 PM
Nicely done Haiku. I can see the dog and the trees. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 11/7/2009 1:44:00 PM
THe first two lines are excellent Tim...Raul
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Date: 11/7/2009 1:33:00 PM
I Love the cloudless blue sky..it seems your dog is enjoying the walk.. sweet haiku--Charma
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