Winged Warrior Poet Sonnet

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Lonesome Love

For where is the love that I seek,
My soul searches deeper still…
Hearts hibernating in mystique,
I surrender to its wavering will…

Looking up to sapphire skies,
May it rain pearls of passion…
Tears that fall from elusive eyes,
Are saved as reminiscent ration…

May I find your love in galaxies gold,
Your sculptural smile behind the veil…
Marooned to your mesmerizing mold
Lost at sea to your sequestered sail…

Can lonesome love eternally exist,
Where kept kisses are forever missed.





Dec.31.2019
2019 best sonnet 
Sponsored by: John Hamilton

Placed 3'rd & POTD...Thank You

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Caren Krutsinger January 30, 2020 at 5:42 AM Exquisite! Congrats on POTD. Well deserved WW.

Funom Makama January 10, 2020 at 11:20 AM Delicious lines, your imagery and creativity are royal sisters. Nice reading from the pen of your mind. Happy 2020.

Kim Rodrigues January 10, 2020 at 5:54 AM Love that last line, WW! congrats on POTD! ...Kimmy :)

Jennifer Proxenos January 6, 2020 at 9:49 AM Hi Wingster my friend, congratulations a your truly deserved POTD - I loved it - hope 2020 is a blessed year for you and that all your dreams come to fruition. Jennster!

Lin Lane January 5, 2020 at 9:24 AM I've just returned from an extended visit with family to find this fantastic sonnet from you, J. Two thoughts that I favor are: your comparison of tears to pearls of passion, and...that you are "Marooned... Lost at sea to your sequestered sail…" Excellent poetic imagery.

Paula Goldsmith January 4, 2020 at 11:31 AM Congratulations. A wonderful poem. Love your end, "Can lonesome love eternally exist, Where kept kisses are forever missed." All the missed kisses.............

Anne-Lise Andresen January 3, 2020 at 7:45 AM - W.W., congratulations on your beautiful p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lady Labyrinth January 3, 2020 at 1:31 AM Lovin' this.... "Tears that fall from elusive eyes, Are saved as reminiscent ration"... congrats Light Angel.

Pratap Roy January 3, 2020 at 12:35 AM Congrats ..... A good Sonnet. Very well expressed. God bless you.

Eve Roper January 2, 2020 at 11:20 PM Congratulations on your win in John Hamilton, Best Sonnet Contest. Hugs Eve

Winged Warrior January 2, 2020 at 6:59 PM Thank you to everyone for your beautiful comments...and to help make this POTD...had no idea...Muchos Gracias my fellow poets...and may you have the Happiest of New! Years! ^WW^ :o)

Silent One January 2, 2020 at 3:32 PM another great sonnet... written so well..

Demetrios Trifiatis January 2, 2020 at 12:44 AM Congratulations dear friend, WW for the honor of POTD that so rightly was bestowed upon your wonderful poem! A great beginning for the New Year! Wish you more and greater successes.

Connie Marcum Wong January 1, 2020 at 8:59 PM No surprise this beauty was honored with POTD! Congratulations my friend. As you know I loved it and Faved it. : ) xxoo

Eve Roper January 1, 2020 at 8:00 PM wonderful well deserved POTD

Jc Hawkens January 1, 2020 at 7:03 PM Beautiful written poem. Congrats on POTD.

David Mchattie January 1, 2020 at 6:50 PM Lovely poem my friend. Congrats on POTD. Have a great day.

John Hamilton January 1, 2020 at 4:21 PM Congrats WW, just found out it was POTD, excellent choice!

Tania Kitchin January 1, 2020 at 4:15 PM Beautiful WW, congratulations on POTD!

John Watt January 1, 2020 at 4:03 PM Great write, WW. Love the line, "Hearts hibernating in mystique" and the whole melancholy longing vibe. Some awesome phrases, too: "your sculptural smile", "your sequestered sail". Congrats on POTD - well deserved. Happy 2020! ~ John

Beautiful Scars January 1, 2020 at 1:59 PM wow amazing! Loved the voice, congrats lovely WW, May your year bring you laughter and love. x:-)-luloo

Jan Allison January 1, 2020 at 1:50 PM a superb sonnet ^WW^ many congrats on your win and a very well deserved POTD:-) Happy New Year:-) hugs Jan xx

John Hamilton January 1, 2020 at 1:29 PM Nice sonnet, congrats WW on a nice third place win!

Brandy Nicole January 1, 2020 at 12:49 PM Love will always find its way to the heart. Sometimes, we must be patient. So beautifully written and presented, my Warrior with Wonderful Wings. Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Day. Happy New Year!! :) Brandy

Ts Poetry January 1, 2020 at 10:44 AM I sure hope so WW..love is out there it just has to find us.

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