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Lonesome Love

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For where is the love that I seek, My soul searches deeper still… Hearts hibernating in mystique, I surrender to its wavering will… Looking up to sapphire skies, May it rain pearls of passion… Tears that fall from elusive eyes, Are saved as reminiscent ration… May I find your love in galaxies gold, Your sculptural smile behind the veil… Marooned to your mesmerizing mold Lost at sea to your sequestered sail… Can lonesome love eternally exist, Where kept kisses are forever missed. Dec.31.2019 2019 best sonnet Sponsored by: John Hamilton Placed 3'rd & POTD...Thank You

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Date: 1/30/2020 5:42:00 AM
Exquisite! Congrats on POTD. Well deserved WW.
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Date: 1/10/2020 11:20:00 AM
Delicious lines, your imagery and creativity are royal sisters. Nice reading from the pen of your mind. Happy 2020.
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Date: 1/10/2020 5:54:00 AM
Love that last line, WW! congrats on POTD! ...Kimmy :)
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Date: 1/6/2020 9:49:00 AM
Hi Wingster my friend, congratulations a your truly deserved POTD - I loved it - hope 2020 is a blessed year for you and that all your dreams come to fruition. Jennster!
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Date: 1/5/2020 9:24:00 AM
I've just returned from an extended visit with family to find this fantastic sonnet from you, J. Two thoughts that I favor are: your comparison of tears to pearls of passion, and...that you are "Marooned... Lost at sea to your sequestered sail…" Excellent poetic imagery.
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Date: 1/4/2020 11:31:00 AM
Congratulations. A wonderful poem. Love your end, "Can lonesome love eternally exist, Where kept kisses are forever missed." All the missed kisses.............
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Date: 1/3/2020 7:45:00 AM
- W.W., congratulations on your beautiful p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/3/2020 3:33:00 AM
This is a beauty of a sonnet, WW. A well deserved 3rd place in the contest and a POTD honour. A fave for me. T.J
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Date: 1/3/2020 1:31:00 AM
Lovin' this.... "Tears that fall from elusive eyes, Are saved as reminiscent ration"... congrats Light Angel.
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Date: 1/3/2020 12:35:00 AM
Congrats ..... A good Sonnet. Very well expressed. God bless you.
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Date: 1/2/2020 11:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in John Hamilton, Best Sonnet Contest. Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/2/2020 6:59:00 PM
Thank you to everyone for your beautiful comments...and to help make this POTD...had no idea...Muchos Gracias my fellow poets...and may you have the Happiest of New! Years! ^WW^ :o)
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Date: 1/2/2020 3:32:00 PM
another great sonnet... written so well..
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Date: 1/2/2020 1:34:00 AM
Your writing abilities never waiver. A meaningful sonnet and congratulations for your win.
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Date: 1/2/2020 12:44:00 AM
Congratulations dear friend, WW for the honor of POTD that so rightly was bestowed upon your wonderful poem! A great beginning for the New Year! Wish you more and greater successes.
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Date: 1/1/2020 8:59:00 PM
No surprise this beauty was honored with POTD! Congratulations my friend. As you know I loved it and Faved it. : ) xxoo
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Date: 1/1/2020 8:00:00 PM
wonderful well deserved POTD
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Date: 1/1/2020 7:03:00 PM
Beautiful written poem. Congrats on POTD.
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Date: 1/1/2020 6:50:00 PM
Lovely poem my friend. Congrats on POTD. Have a great day.
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Date: 1/1/2020 4:21:00 PM
Congrats WW, just found out it was POTD, excellent choice!
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Date: 1/1/2020 4:15:00 PM
Beautiful WW, congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 1/1/2020 4:03:00 PM
Great write, WW. Love the line, "Hearts hibernating in mystique" and the whole melancholy longing vibe. Some awesome phrases, too: "your sculptural smile", "your sequestered sail". Congrats on POTD - well deserved. Happy 2020! ~ John
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Date: 1/1/2020 1:59:00 PM
wow amazing! Loved the voice, congrats lovely WW, May your year bring you laughter and love. x:-)-luloo
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Date: 1/1/2020 1:50:00 PM
a superb sonnet ^WW^ many congrats on your win and a very well deserved POTD:-) Happy New Year:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/1/2020 1:29:00 PM
Nice sonnet, congrats WW on a nice third place win!
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