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Lonesome, Lost and Blue

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Written on March 19, 2025

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Sea, who breaks against the shore, reveals the anguish soul’s soundless urge to feel the mist of impatient waves remembering the solace, the soothing, the sanctity beautiful waters scraping against the sand – a sensitive peace that has the upper hand, the whimsical story grace falling across the land… mountains, climbing toward the summer sky, raised hesitant to softly cry, moaning to the limbs of oak and pine stealthy leaves in colors of tempting light, arising so forever never decides to let time pass on by, let time remember why the dream can silence the nights, fading through the heart, in inklings of softest cries… meadows, blown wild as the twilight’s melancholic rhymes, a story unfolding on the hesitant stems, flowers and grass revealing the music of a soul who hears the night’s prayers erasing the fear, pouring out gentle instead, a furious race between loneliness and the chaotic unrest of a crowd’s laughter, the story of two who connect… in rhythms of sea and shore, in the praise of the mountain’s roar beyond the meadows and beneath the limbs of those oak’s heavy hopes stirs the silence of a winsome grief so alone, so daunting, so full like the lingering feeling of unending blue, the melodious ages race to the truth where anguish evokes the mist of a mourning who is imbittered by doubt, a mourning who never lets the joy out… grief is the moment when light meets the dawn, with a fog who dithers, forlorn risking the silence, risking the heart and soul, risking the moment before hope withstood the song who colors the heart in lost, colors the prayers in pitiful words, colors the forsaken in lingering lies who remember what if feels like to grieve without end, with a grief that shatters every peace the lives within. Every peace – apart from Him who comforts beyond the heart’s unrest, Comforts in a way that is surely blessed… just believe and know His relief is best!

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Date: 3/21/2025 5:42:00 PM
in praise of a Saviour who lovingly guards us all in more ways than one
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