Lonely Waters
Water;
Everywhere, yet
barely there.
I thought I was going to fall
into—
through—
this cold emptiness.
Submerged,
suffocated
and no one would notice.
So I clung on
to the edge of the pool.
My mother told me to let go,
I told me to let go.
Sinking,
a sinking feeling,
suspended in a lonely place,
bounded by these fragile walls so
easily crossed over.
My vision went blurry,
all I could see was my fingers
still clinging on.
Copyright © Zin Lim | Year Posted 2013
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