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Lonely Road

My heart and soul locked away Walking alone my lonely road My sadness nesting inside me I can’t hear the birds sing Looking out at greener grass Letting my life slip pass Feeling like a total ass No rehearsal my life No rewind from misery Fiction

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/2/2017 11:29:00 AM
You have portrayed these emotions so well Niall I'm glad its a fiction write but I guess many folks can relate to these feelings:-( hugs jan xx
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Niall Fulham
Date: 9/2/2017 12:07:00 PM
Hi Jan, I would say we all have , some deeper than others ::))))hugs
Date: 9/1/2017 10:24:00 PM
oh Niall, such sadness, loneliness and regret done so very well! An intriguing, interesting and introspective write. Beautifully written. I really enjoyed your poem this evening my friend :)
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Niall Fulham
Date: 9/2/2017 8:06:00 AM
Hi Susan , thank you for comment , I think we all have a small amount of this sadness in us ::)))) hugs
Date: 8/30/2017 1:56:00 AM
- Many who feel this loneliness ... sad, Niall - Great written - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Niall Fulham
Date: 8/30/2017 11:21:00 AM
Hi Anne-Lise , thank you for comment glad you enjoyed ::)))hugs
Date: 8/29/2017 8:42:00 PM
I'm sure happy it's fiction! Nicely sad :)
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Niall Fulham
Date: 8/30/2017 11:20:00 AM
Hi Akkina , glad you enjoyed the sad my friend ::)))hugs
Date: 8/29/2017 5:39:00 PM
You have portrayed, hurt, sadness and regret, very well with this Niall.
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Niall Fulham
Date: 8/29/2017 5:41:00 PM
Hi Heidi , thank you very much for comment my friend :::)))hugs

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