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Lonely Cloud

A lonely cloud sat on a mountain looking for someone to play with staring out over landscape he saw friends far away with a puff he flew to join with them they had fun playing ball written 05/31/2014 contest One Original Nonet

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Date: 6/5/2014 9:24:00 AM
Loved the title of this poem, and of course the poem! :)
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Date: 6/3/2014 3:30:00 PM
I love how you employed the word "puff" in this nonet, Shadow. Would the sun be the big yellow ball in the sky? So cute.
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Date: 6/1/2014 4:37:00 PM
vivid imagery and personification! wow! GBU
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Date: 5/31/2014 6:31:00 PM
Great personification of the movements in the cloudscape. Good luck in the contest, Shadow!
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Date: 5/31/2014 3:26:00 PM
Dear Shadow, You gave me a smile with this delightful nonet. Clouds move so quickly across the sky that I can truly imagine a lonely one seeking company to play ball! The syllable count appears fine, dear. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/31/2014 8:49:00 AM
Very sweet, check your sylable count.
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Date: 5/31/2014 8:08:00 AM
A nice airy nonet...beautiful...hugs Tim
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Date: 5/31/2014 5:27:00 AM
A great flight of imagination, shadow. Good luck in the contest,
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Date: 5/31/2014 5:04:00 AM
- A cute poem, Shadow :) - Good luck in the contest ! - Wish you a nice weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/31/2014 4:58:00 AM
Lovely nonet good luck with the contest. Hugs Jan xx
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