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Lonely Centerpiece

alone she stands having weathered the fall bulldozers claimed her comrades... soon a mall’s centerpiece *Entry for Rick's Kimo Contest

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/15/2012 3:52:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/15/2012 9:51:00 AM

Isnt that the truth..a belated congrats my dear LNC. BG

Christopher Bunton

Date: 3/13/2012 3:39:00 PM

Congratulations!

Kash Poet

Date: 3/13/2012 11:49:00 AM

Congrats Carolyn on your win in the contest.Loved it !

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/13/2012 5:30:00 AM

Congratulations for your placement in this contest Carolyn. Love, Carol

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/12/2012 5:09:00 PM

love your theme here, Carolyn, congrats on your placement, harry

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/7/2012 12:41:00 PM

I had a chuckle at Andrea and being clueless.. Yours is unique and brilliant Carolyn, absolutely love it! All the best for Rick's contest.. :) love you Wilma

Daver Austin

Date: 3/7/2012 11:51:00 AM

Must be a bass guitar. Those vibes will bring down a house. Seriously, I gots ta know what that centerpiece is. LOve, daver

Daver Austin
Date: 3/7/2012 11:53:00 AM

Shucks! I shoulda read down the list of comments. My bod's gone, the mind is going. Love, daver

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/7/2012 5:59:00 AM

Intriguing work..Sets my thoughts to what was that center piece?..Yes, we have some native blue butterflies in Georgia but the picture came from the internet and I am not sure if it is one or not...There are so many butterflies and moths that I don't know if I could ever learn them all..Thanks for stopping by...Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 3/7/2012 9:45:00 AM

BTW, the only "blue" butterflies I see here look more like Monarch butterflies with the orange exchanged for blue.

Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 3/7/2012 9:43:00 AM

Sara, the tree would soon be the centerpiece of a new mall. At some malls there is a center point with trees or gardens. This lone tree's comrades had been sacrificed to build the mall. Sorry this one was apparently cryptic to a lot of people. Perhaps I didn't make my point well, but it was the best I could do with the short verse form. Love, carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/6/2012 10:41:00 PM

wow, what an interesting way to do this contest. Everyone is coming up with brilliant stuff and I am sitting here clueless!! Sure to be a winner, Carolyn.

Kash Poet

Date: 3/6/2012 9:24:00 PM

Very nice Kimo on the theme of the contest Carolyn.Best wishes for Rick's contest.

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 3/6/2012 5:38:00 PM

I am soo curious about this short piece now! If u get time, would you tell me more? I think it would help me to appreciate what u have said here more. I can tell there's an amazing story behind this. ====)

Russell Sivey

Date: 3/6/2012 5:00:00 PM

What a spectacular write this one is my friend! Wow, I just love the kicker line, "soon a mall's centerpiece" this is an excellent line Carolyn! I really enjoyed this poem that I have read this evening! This write fits the contest perfectly, I'm glad I got to read it! Glorious Work!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/6/2012 4:08:00 PM

this portrait u created with your words is simply unique and awesomely presented.. felt the lonely tree in the read Carolyn.. good luck in Rick's contest.. so happy he has returned ..luv..

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/6/2012 3:35:00 PM

very sad..wow..hope you are feeling better BIG HUGS Light & Love

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/6/2012 3:07:00 PM

Well done Carolyn. - oxox Anne-Lise