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Loneliness Down By the Lake

Saturated in the mist found by the pond, of this scenery I used to be so fond- The lake is covered in chartreuse moss, and I am surrounded by the pain of loss. Is it too much to ask to be happy once more? I thought that life was supposed to be great, if only I had the satisfaction I had before, but now LONELINESS DOWN BY THE LAKE is my fate. I boil a kettle of cocoa on the stove’s fire, longing for life to bring me back my desire- This cottage I own used to be homey and warm, now only memories of lost love seem to swarm. Is it possible to find a heartfelt love again? Someone to hold hands with along the shoreline, now solitude seems to be my only friend... if only mother nature could bring back what’s mine. I have been stuck on earth with condemnation, lost in the severity of complete isolation- My innocence is longing to be one with me, my mind thirsts for my blind eyes to see. Is love that has desolated bound to return? I only know that I am suited for pain- For the breaking of love’s bread, I do yearn, but now LONELINESS DOWN BY THE LAKE does remain. Kettle, Pond Lake Poetry Contest Nayda Ivette Negron February 9, 2018

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Date: 6/2/2018 8:11:00 PM
Congrats on a well deserved top win, Laura.
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Date: 5/20/2018 4:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your great win, Laura.
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Date: 5/19/2018 4:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your win.i like how this is written, a lake draws me in.
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Date: 5/18/2018 1:52:00 AM
Coming back to congratulate on your great win, Laura.
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Date: 2/10/2018 5:23:00 AM
A nicely penned poem, Laura. Loneliness really connects with the lake.
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Date: 2/27/2018 1:39:00 PM
thanks sweet Subimal :)-luloo
Date: 2/9/2018 6:21:00 PM
Hello Laura, I like this poem. I like the verses two,four, five and six.I am feeling loneliness to. have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 2/27/2018 1:38:00 PM
many thanks cheer up! :):):)-luloo
Date: 2/9/2018 4:05:00 PM
Laura, I love your bluesy poem. Lovely but still sending a week of sunshine your way. Line xx
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Date: 2/27/2018 1:38:00 PM
thank you sweet Line :)-luloo

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