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Loneliness At Dusk

watching sun go down over the ridge dusk creeps slowly over meadow while birds settle for the night and a lone star peeks out from darkening sky, loneliness comes like a fog to my mind
written September 4, 2021

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Date: 9/5/2021 6:32:00 AM
The shape of this poem conjures up a funnel into the darkness and fog of too long nights
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/5/2021 8:06:00 AM
I hoped it might, John. Thanks for your insightful comment.
Date: 9/5/2021 1:59:00 AM
Why do we feel more lonely at night? I found this Nonet lovely but sad.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/5/2021 8:06:00 AM
I don't know, Shirley, but it certainly is true.

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