Jan Allison Poet Acrostic

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Loneliness

Longing to have someone to share my life with
One special person just for me
Nobody around to love me for who I am
Everybody needs somebody
Living on my own is so difficult
I crave company… I just need someone to talk to
Never felt so alone and isolated
Envious of others who are in a relationship
Solitude is so soul destroying
Someday I will find someone to share my dreams… someday

10th May 2015

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James Fraser May 29, 2015 at 4:40 PM This could easily be me in your words Jan. For I'm so happy I've been spared such now, hugs, James xx Jan Allison May 29, 2015 at 4:43 PM I am so pleased you finally have found happiness James:-) Hugs Jan xx

Thomas Martin May 20, 2015 at 11:39 AM Great take on a subject many are or have gone through I should know; having been the male version at times in my life! Have said this before, but truly admire your graceful style!! Jan Allison May 20, 2015 at 11:53 AM Thank you so much for your lovely comment Thomas - I have learned so so much since I started writing 15 months ago - wow what a journey I have been on! Hugs Jan xx

Peter Dome May 15, 2015 at 4:10 AM This is sad Jan know the feeling well. I hate being on my own so much. I've given up and don't leave the house. because when I go out, I feel worse in my Prayers best wishes. Pete. Jan Allison May 15, 2015 at 7:14 AM Oh Peter your comment is so so sad - do try to get out being stuck in the house really can be soul destroying:-( Hugs jan xx

David Mcsorley May 13, 2015 at 6:32 AM Jan, heart rending word's, I thought it was your pain till I read some of the comments, still beautifully written :-) x Dave Jan Allison May 13, 2015 at 7:00 AM Thanks David I am glad I managed to portray it realistically:-) Hugs Jan xx

Kp Nunez May 13, 2015 at 5:10 AM A very good take on the subject, Jan, and using an Acrostic too. You were able to convey the message with the limitations set by this form. Hugs! Kim :-) Jan Allison May 13, 2015 at 5:54 AM Thanks for dropping by Kim:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich May 12, 2015 at 4:15 PM this can describe a lot of women, Jan, and many do want to have a partner, though not all of them. WEll, it's great seeing you today and now I need to get home,Kind of late!! Later, gator. Jan Allison May 12, 2015 at 4:17 PM Thanks Andrea I am sure many can relate to this scenario:-( Hugs jan xx

Kim Van Breda May 12, 2015 at 3:47 PM Hi Jan.... stopping by to read your poetry and glad I did. This is both beautiful and sad.. a very poignant write... thank you for sharing xx~xx Jan Allison May 12, 2015 at 3:49 PM Thanks so much for dropping by Kim:-) Lovely to see you back on the site:-) xx Hugs Jan xx

Bl Devnath May 12, 2015 at 1:50 PM Loneliness has its own sadly rhythm you have sensationalized with beautiful words. 7 sure. What is loneliness is known to one who passes the path of life through it. Beautifully done. Loved always, my lovely friend. Loved always,bl Jan Allison May 12, 2015 at 1:56 PM Thanks so much for dropping by always a pleasure to see you here BL:-) Hugs Jan xx

Emile Pinet May 11, 2015 at 8:35 PM The emotions and message lift themselves off the page and rest comfortably within the reader's heart. Emile. Jan Allison May 12, 2015 at 1:18 AM Thanks so much Emile:-) Hugs Jan xx

James Peranteau May 11, 2015 at 10:03 AM At first I thought; wait, Jan is married...then I read some of the posts here and I thought, she had me fooled. Then of course, I thought of the writes I have done (Eligys) for souls I have never met, to console those souls in grief. Sometimes it's of benifit to do so if we love our fellow man ! Wonderul undertaking dear poet ! Have a wonderful week Jan......much love, james Jan Allison May 11, 2015 at 10:42 AM Yes fiction for me but sadly it is reality for some others:-( Hugs jan xx

Constance La France May 11, 2015 at 9:03 AM Jan your poem is deep with emotions 7 and thanks for visiting my poem Jan Allison May 11, 2015 at 10:42 AM Thanks so much for dropping by:-) Hugs Jan xx

Wilma Neels May 11, 2015 at 6:31 AM You bring your message across beautifully Jan, I can imagine there is quit a few people out there that can identify with this write :) enjoy the week ahead Jan Allison May 11, 2015 at 7:31 AM Thanks Wilma I am sure there are many who can identify with it:-( Hugs jan xx

Liam Mcdaid May 11, 2015 at 5:48 AM deeply sad touching piece jan wishing you a beautiful week pal Jan Allison May 11, 2015 at 7:30 AM Thanks Lima hope you have a lovely week too:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso May 10, 2015 at 11:51 PM Ok I see this was a trick, you beat me to the punch!!!!!!! On a serious note I have to say, when you so serious, you do it like a pro! bravo!!!!!! Jan Allison May 11, 2015 at 1:10 AM Aww thanks my friend:-) Hugs Jan xx

Nandita Das May 10, 2015 at 9:57 PM Nice write. I love solitude though. Delight in my own company. A great acrostic on loneliness. A 7. Jan Allison May 11, 2015 at 1:09 AM Yes I too love my own space but not all the time:-) Hugs jan xx

Tim Smith May 10, 2015 at 9:25 PM Be happy you have your hubby Jan...too many days I feel like this...luckily the kids keep me busy Jan Allison May 11, 2015 at 1:09 AM I can understand that Tim:-( hugs Jan xx

Mark Ackerson May 10, 2015 at 8:13 PM Sweet solitude won by trial, Jan (be careful what you wish for). Nonetheless, a beautiful share! Jan Allison May 11, 2015 at 1:09 AM Thanks Mark:-) Hugs jan xx

Lindsay Laurie May 10, 2015 at 7:45 PM G'day Jan... nice creative poem Jan that sadly too many can relate too these days. Is the art of conversation dying - Lindsay

Jack Horne May 10, 2015 at 5:59 PM oh, such a sad write here, my friend - glad I know it isn't about you personally x Jan Allison May 10, 2015 at 6:03 PM I wrote this yesterday Jack after meeting someone who was feeling low:-( Hugs Jan xx