Loneliness

(Alone in a dorm. First Christmas in America)

How do I describe loneliness?
I feel in my body.
I feel in my heart.
I feel alone at night on a vast desert
Keeping company with twinkling stars above

I can not describe its hue
I can not describe its shape
I can not measure its hardness

Is it an emptiness in my heart?
Then what is emptiness?
Is it separation from people?
But monks seem to be content in a temple on a desolate mountain.
Is it a want of friendship?
But some feel loneliness in the midst of friends

I don’t know
I don’t know
I only know that it is here with me
Devoid of shape, color and weight
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Michael Avatar
August 28, 2019 at 8:20 AM
Loneliness is the man in front of a mirror...Nice expressive poem...
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 27, 2019 at 2:32 PM
Hello Hi-Dong Chai, sometimes a person can feel loneliness in a room full of people. have a nice day my friend.
Green Avatar
August 27, 2019 at 10:36 AM
Really nicely done. I could feel the loneliness in your words.
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