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Loneliness

LONELINESS The lonely person walks unnoticed with unfocused eye and unsteady step, failing to keep pace with the crowd. An approach of reliance to everything, like a crutch under the arm of the wounded, maintains balance amidst turbulence. You saw and did not recognize or notice, as if that person was as normal as you, but beneath the shrouded cloak of emptiness hides a soul weeping dry tears. Loneliness feeds on isolation, depression its friend, little noticed, but there are signals. Loneliness has a signature; a tell-tale sign for all to see, like an amateur gambler's tell. It might live with you unknown or work by your side eight hours a day, where its influence grinds, as if it were a metal file. Loneliness is looking for new hosts. Has it found you?

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Date: 1/8/2019 8:36:00 PM
Hello Gerald, sometimes it is good to be alone. Yet not all the time. I do not like to be lonely all the time, i seek to be with people as well. have a nice evening my friend.
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Gerald Greene
Date: 1/8/2019 9:16:00 PM
we poets understand the value of solitude, which is different from loneliness. And yet a little loneliness can be seed that bears fruit for others.
Date: 1/8/2019 12:04:00 AM
Wow that was good. I could visualise that person. Lots of feeling too. Really nicely written !
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Gerald Greene
Date: 1/8/2019 6:49:00 AM
Thank you Maxie, I hope doesn't describe you!
Date: 12/19/2018 1:02:00 AM
This is brilliantly composed with insight and knowledge Gerald! Congratulations on a very deserving POTD! : )
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Gerald Greene
Date: 12/19/2018 4:32:00 AM
Thank you Connie
Date: 12/18/2018 11:49:00 PM
Hello Gerald, This is a fabulous free verse for sure!! Congratulations too on the POTD honor!! Your "Loneliness" is quite striking, and, for me, is very emotive in the way your describe it in relation to human beings, and, in fact the human psyche. The question you pose in your last two verses is quite compelling. Outstanding Work!! A FAVE!! Best Holiday Wishes, Gary
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Gerald Greene
Date: 12/19/2018 4:32:00 AM
Thank you Gary
Date: 12/18/2018 5:31:00 PM
Wow...you have certainly captured the essence of loneliness and it has an important message too. I can certainly see why you had gotten POTD. A belated congratulations, Gerald. FAVED!
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Gerald Greene
Date: 12/18/2018 8:23:00 PM
Thank you Carole
Date: 12/17/2018 4:45:00 AM
You have beautifully and artistically captured the trauma of a lonely soul! Indeed, loneliness always has a room inside our hearts and souls.. We are blessed and blissful when it is rendered into the beauty of poetry.. A wonderful poem worthy of the honour of POTD.. Congratulations, Gerald, on the well earned recognition.. My deepest regards.
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Gerald Greene
Date: 12/17/2018 5:58:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words.
Date: 12/17/2018 3:22:00 AM
"Loneliness feeds on isolation" That line is very true. Well done, Gerald.
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Gerald Greene
Date: 12/17/2018 5:57:00 AM
Thank you Lin
Date: 12/16/2018 6:25:00 PM
a very poignant piece especially at this time of year, many congrats on POTD:-) hugs jan xx
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Gerald Greene
Date: 12/16/2018 9:11:00 PM
Thank you Jan
Date: 12/16/2018 4:09:00 PM
Very touching! Congrats on POTD...you certainly deserved it for this one. I can relate very well to this. We often have to reach out to others, or let them reach us...not isolate.
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Gerald Greene
Date: 12/16/2018 9:11:00 PM
Thank you Sherry
Date: 12/16/2018 3:14:00 PM
I enjoyed being captivated by your beautifully sad poem portraying the pain of loneliness, Gerald. Deep and moving imagery made your work worthy indeed of POTD honors. Congratulations on your wonderful recognition for your exceptional piece. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Gerald Greene
Date: 12/16/2018 4:02:00 PM
Thank you Susan. Yes, imagery makes a difference that we poets need to utilize well.
Date: 12/16/2018 2:58:00 PM
Reading your thoughts once again, and I am reminded why those around you, will never be lonely. Such a wonderful feeling indeed, knowing someone like you is near. Congratulations Gerald, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/16/2018 3:11:00 PM
You are very welcome. I mean every word. Thank you for having a wonderful heart. I appreciate you.
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Gerald Greene
Date: 12/16/2018 3:07:00 PM
Brandy, you are so sweet. A wonderful person. Thank you.
Date: 12/16/2018 2:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your fine poetry being warded POTD! I enjoyed reading this well crafted poem on the pains of loneliness my friend.. A fav..
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Gerald Greene
Date: 12/16/2018 3:06:00 PM
Thank you Robert
Date: 12/16/2018 1:20:00 PM
- Loneliness sets deep traces of heart and soul, Gerald - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Gerald Greene
Date: 12/16/2018 3:06:00 PM
I like your comment too. Thanks Sunshine
Date: 12/16/2018 12:00:00 PM
Congratulations for POTD :)
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Gerald Greene
Date: 12/16/2018 3:05:00 PM
Thanks Heidi
Date: 12/16/2018 9:57:00 AM
Very, very descriptive. I like the lines especially, "but beneath the shrouded cloak of emptiness hides a soul weeping dry tears." Congratulations.
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Gerald Greene
Date: 12/16/2018 3:05:00 PM
Dry tears makes it more difficult to know when someone is lonely. Thank you Sunlite
Date: 12/16/2018 9:25:00 AM
Gerald, congratulations on having your awesome write selected as POTD, enjoy the honor ~
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Gerald Greene
Date: 12/16/2018 3:03:00 PM
Thank you Dear Heart
Date: 12/16/2018 9:25:00 AM
A fine piece excellently penned Gerald, treating an ignored subject needing brought to everyone's attention as those of us who have experienced it most of our lives. Congrats on the POTD.
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Gerald Greene
Date: 12/16/2018 3:03:00 PM
Everyone here has experienced this, so we know it's an important subject. Thank you Gordon
Date: 12/16/2018 9:14:00 AM
An eye opening poem about a subject that is overlooked. Congratulations on POTD, Gerald.
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Gerald Greene
Date: 12/16/2018 3:02:00 PM
Raising awareness and sensitivities is what we poets can do. Thanks Warren
Date: 12/16/2018 8:32:00 AM
''Tis the season when it really rears its ugly head, congratulations on your honor Gerald...
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Gerald Greene
Date: 12/16/2018 3:01:00 PM
Thank you Charlie
Date: 12/16/2018 7:26:00 AM
Powerful write Gerald..Congrats on POTD
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Gerald Greene
Date: 12/16/2018 8:10:00 AM
Thank you Joseph
Date: 12/16/2018 7:01:00 AM
Congrats on POTD, Gerald. You shine the light on an important ailment.
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Gerald Greene
Date: 12/16/2018 7:33:00 AM
Maybe we can make a difference. Thanks.
Date: 12/16/2018 6:32:00 AM
This is a touching poem about loneliness, sad that so many are lonely, especially this time of the year... Congratulations on your POTD..
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Gerald Greene
Date: 12/16/2018 7:33:00 AM
Thank you Silent One.
Date: 12/16/2018 5:46:00 AM
We were never meant to be lonely...and it is very sad when someone is...Congrats!!! on your POTD!! Gerald...great write my friend...love & light...^WW^
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Gerald Greene
Date: 12/16/2018 6:17:00 AM
Wouldn't it be wonderful if we poets could help remove loneliness from the world!! Thank you WW
Date: 12/14/2018 6:20:00 PM
So true. Well written , bringing to light an important issue :)
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Gerald Greene
Date: 12/14/2018 8:34:00 PM
Thank you, and yes I agree.
Date: 12/14/2018 11:39:00 AM
Many fail to see, that loneliness is more than name for a condition. It is real and it can affect any age. You are being there for someone, even if they aren't lonely. More than you may realize. Your words are enough. ~ Brandy
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/14/2018 11:55:00 AM
You have a kind and caring heart. Thank you for being You.
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Gerald Greene
Date: 12/14/2018 11:48:00 AM
We've all experienced it for short periods, but some are constantly lonely and I want encourage them.

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