Lone Survivor

perfect maple leaf remained untouched by the wind a lone survivor

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Robert Pettit

Date: 3/3/2021 7:19:00 AM

Looks like a good Canadian haiku.

Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 3/3/2021 4:36:00 PM

Could get me in trouble. : ) Thank you, Robert.

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/21/2021 2:23:00 PM

And a beauty this is. I can see the perfect leaf clearly :)

Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 2/21/2021 2:45:00 PM

Thank you Heidi. I preserved it and gave it a gold sheen after I put clear tape over it all. Glad you could see it.

Jo Chamberlain

Date: 2/21/2021 1:51:00 PM

I really enjoyed your Haiku, great imagery.

Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 2/21/2021 2:44:00 PM

Thank you Joanna. Glad you enjoyed it, that is always nice to hear.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/21/2021 12:10:00 PM

An image ive often seen Sandra, hope your weekend is going well. Tom

Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 2/21/2021 2:42:00 PM

Thank you Tom. It is the largest maple leaf that I have ever seen.I have preserved it to show it off.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 2/21/2021 12:07:00 PM

Fine write after the original style of haiku. I enjoyed it immensely!

Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 2/21/2021 2:41:00 PM

Thank you for your kind comment. I am glad that you enjoyed it.