Lone Days

There is a forgotten cabin 
that stands by the sea,
Old and dilapidating,
Its former years I still remember,
Happiness dwelt within its walls,
Joyful tunes emanated from its enclosure, 
A summer home,
A vacation abode,
Its walls glittered under the sun’s rays,
Abandoned and deserted,
It stands alone and grey,
No more pleasure to them,
They had gone and never came back,
It stands in a forlorn hope.



May 11, 2022.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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George Avatar
May 12, 2022 at 10:20 PM
There is something eerie about the atmosphere you have created and the lone cabin staying dilapidated by the sea in forlorn hope ! Really enjoyed your poem Thompson !
Emate Avatar
May 13, 2022 at 5:42 AM
Thank you, Valsa. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.
Chamberlain Avatar
May 11, 2022 at 1:29 PM
I enjoyed your poem. I really hope the cabin can be saved, and loved once more.
Emate Avatar
May 11, 2022 at 8:49 PM
I earnestly desire so. Thank you for liking the poem.
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