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Unlock the mind Let insanity caress reality The explosion May create a poet Of sorts Key West lime Running out of time Kissing strangers while moonshine Tumbles inside the livered soul Unlock the horrors and let me go The last good kiss Ran amiss

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Robert Pettit

Date: 11/2/2016 8:43:00 PM

An intriguing write. Very imaginative.

Charlie Smith

Date: 11/2/2016 7:26:00 PM

The title made me think it might have been a write about one of my relatives, oh well, I still enjoyed the read. Well done Arthur...

Jean Murray

Date: 11/2/2016 1:05:00 PM

Describe a good kiss.

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 11/1/2016 5:57:00 PM

Lol! Thank you for posting this great write. I enjoyed the read.........A.M.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/1/2016 3:30:00 PM

lots of amazing imagery, Arthur. I enjoyed this one. wow, what a picture to go with it!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/1/2016 2:08:00 PM

Very clever, Arthur! Love the way you have the insanity caressing reality to create a poet. Guess we writers are all a bit loony. If we avoid "moonshine," perhaps we'll never suffer from a "livered soul." But what can we do when our "last good kiss" runs amiss? Quite a thought-provoking write. 7 of course.

Eve Roper

Date: 11/1/2016 10:21:00 AM

oh excellent :)

Joseph May

Date: 10/31/2016 8:59:00 PM

Nicely penned and full of mystery...

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/31/2016 10:41:00 PM

Thank you Joseph!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/31/2016 5:54:00 PM

Trying to unravel the meaning behind the lines is driving me insane Arthur...fascinating poem. Hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/31/2016 10:41:00 PM

:) thanks Jan!

Chris Green

Date: 10/31/2016 10:32:00 AM

Such a creative and masterful piece of writing. Somewhat abstract in form but more than pleasant to the eye and the mind. So many well crafted lines in this one. Really nice Arthur

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/31/2016 10:39:00 PM

Thank you Chris!

Tim Smith

Date: 10/31/2016 8:10:00 AM

Well this brings to mind a few things Arthur, the first is freeing a trapped mind and the second in regards to Key West is "Fantasy Fest" which is a week long event where the masses dress in mostly just body paint turning reality into fantasy. Love your poem.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/31/2016 10:39:00 PM

Love to see the body painting!!! :)