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The cooling evening breeze lifted and moved the laggard clouds filtering the burnished moon through the sheer curtains on either side, makes nature shiver. Moon holds its gaze with longing over the Scottish Highlands watching Nessie swim in the dark of the silver facets mirror lake. She’s grandiose and magnificent in size, with a towering neck and hump protruding from the shimmering water. She belongs in the vast bottomless depths of blue with her magic of immortality kept hidden. She's welcomed to come to life to cast shadows upon the lake, one to openness that stretch endlessly before her. Mountains rise like giants beautiful and imposing meeting the stark gray sky on the horizon. Light flickers in the distant as the sky begins to darken. Lighting erupts with rumbling growls. Streaks zigzag and fork across the sky in a majestic display shooting from seemingly out of nowhere to hit the ground one after another impressive exhibition of power. With not a soul in sight she feeds while the moon shines. Nature keeps an invisible secret. 12/17/2017
Poetry Contest: Loch Ness Sponsored by: Thvia Shetley

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Date: 2/1/2018 6:15:00 PM
What a great rendering, Eve! You know how to --- in Deep South jargon --- pen them word!! Congratulations!
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Date: 1/31/2018 5:49:00 PM
I TOLD you this was good!!! Big congrats, EVE!!
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Date: 1/31/2018 4:27:00 PM
Such excellent imagery of this mystical setting in your Poem, Eve. Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/31/2018 3:04:00 PM
Beautiful imagery Eve, congrats :)
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Date: 1/31/2018 2:48:00 PM
Wow - spectacular imagery. Beautifully done, Eve. Congrats on an awesome winning poem.
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Date: 1/21/2018 5:44:00 PM
This is a wonderful written poem.I enjoyed to read this poem. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 12/28/2017 10:10:00 PM
As we read we really enjoy in suspense "Nessie swim in the dark of the silver facets mirror lake. ...". ... Awesome ...
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Date: 12/26/2017 12:31:00 PM
This picture has truly inspired you, Eve! Beautiful imagery captures our senses, while somehow urging us to keep Nessie's whereabouts secret. The Scottish Highlands are enticing and full of mystery. Hugs // paul
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Date: 12/23/2017 9:48:00 AM
I have heard of Lochs and Bagels and having lochs of fun and lochs like great when they are full. A loch full of a crock is not very pretty though.
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Date: 12/23/2017 11:24:00 AM
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Date: 12/22/2017 10:22:00 AM
Wow Eve, your portrait in words matches the magical picture perfectly! This is an awesome write and going into my faves! I can imagine seeing this remarkable poem at the top. Happy holidays to you and your family Eve. : )xxoo
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Date: 12/21/2017 6:50:00 PM
you tell a wonderful tale Eve, I've been to loch ness and didn't see Nessie:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/21/2017 12:13:00 AM
Magic!
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Date: 12/20/2017 4:22:00 PM
Enjoyed reading about Lock Ness..Maybe one does exsist..Thanks for all the visits to my page..Sara
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Date: 12/20/2017 2:03:00 AM
- Excellent described from a myth that often something you can believe is true, but as is not proven, Eve - Best wishes in the contest - Merry Christmas to you and your family - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/19/2017 11:40:00 PM
Wow this reads like a winner. Described so aptly and poetically. Lochness must exist and u bring it to life so charmingly. The invisible secret of nature eh. Kudos. This really ought to catch the judges eye. Do tell me whenever u win any. Hugs n take care.
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Date: 12/19/2017 1:46:00 PM
So lovely and majestically descriptive, Eve! Janice
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Date: 12/19/2017 1:46:00 PM
So lovely and majestically descriptive, Eve! Janice
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Date: 12/19/2017 7:21:00 AM
This is one of the best poems I have read for this contest... Great imagery and some great lines...
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Date: 12/18/2017 5:16:00 PM
wow, this is AMAZING, Eve. I don't know if I read many of these but to me, the best one I've seen. So full of description. I just did a tanka on it (not posted yet) and I can't hold a candle to this one!
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Date: 12/18/2017 1:08:00 PM
What a delightful tale you have written in poetic form, Eve! Kept me captivated to the end. We have visited Loch Ness but have yet to see the monster! Many thx for your kind comments re The Littlest Christmas Tree and a very Merry Christmas to you and your family - Bob H
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Date: 12/18/2017 12:14:00 PM
I think you have well captured the tale here Eve, I really enjoyed!!!! Good Luck
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Date: 12/18/2017 10:35:00 AM
Oh so classical, burns would read with joy,,truly is a wonderful poem,,good luck in contest.
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Date: 12/18/2017 7:44:00 AM
You described the scene well Eve....Great write
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Date: 12/18/2017 5:17:00 AM
Nessie, a tale. I have often wondered, but you said it right, 'With not a soul in sight she feeds while the moon shines. Nature keeps an invisible secret.' Long may nature keep that secret! A perfect end to your poem! :-)
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Date: 12/17/2017 11:01:00 PM
Having Scottish roots loved this!!!
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