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Let's race out, where the riverbanks surround The grasses flitting upon ladders of pine: Kick your loafers, my soles not leather-bound Carefree as toes grind through a hillside climb. Leave those pairs while tender moments begin, For sunset rises till gazes behold Our summers of youth, our love deep within To recall theme songs, and never grow old. Come dance me barefoot, ignoring night’s hours That we waltz along , down through sand’s floor Igniting fire- glow amidst wildflowers; Shoeless into dawn...this pleasure I adore. Two Pair Of Shoes Contest Sponsored by john lawless 8/4/2017

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Date: 8/11/2017 5:01:00 AM
Wonderful write. Congrats! :) Sunita
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Date: 8/7/2017 11:04:00 PM
a beautiful little write here Nette, congratulations.
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Date: 8/7/2017 9:52:00 PM
Congratulations my dear...
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Date: 8/7/2017 7:08:00 PM
So lovely and romantic Nette! Congratulations on making the short list! : )
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Date: 8/7/2017 7:05:00 PM
Hi Nette, congrats on your placement with this beautiful poem! :)
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Date: 8/7/2017 6:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Nette! Your words just dance of the paper :) awesome
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Date: 8/7/2017 3:46:00 PM
Back to congratulate you Nette!
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Date: 8/7/2017 1:47:00 PM
AH, the foreplay of naked feet on fresh cut grass...
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Date: 8/5/2017 12:29:00 AM
A light hearted beauty I read, Nette, excellent:)
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Date: 8/4/2017 2:45:00 PM
Dancing barefoot among the grasses where the river flows...an enchanting moment that gives joy...good luck
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Date: 8/4/2017 4:29:00 AM
- I dance barefoot ... with pleasure, Nette - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/3/2017 8:09:00 PM
Your lovely write feels exuberant and carefree. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 8/3/2017 6:17:00 PM
This is wonderful Nette. It will be hard to beat. Good luck in the contest. -- Dean
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Date: 8/3/2017 5:36:00 PM
This lovely write really thrills this adventurous side of me my friend! I surely enjoyed reading this incredible poem this evening! You have enthralled me to the fullest by your tender words of summer fun! Great Work! BTW I used to oil paint but haven't found the time to continue to do so. But I miss is terribly. I loved doing it as it was so much fun!
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Date: 8/3/2017 5:24:00 PM
This one is fun one! Well written for the contest nette. :)
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