Lizzie Borden

(Limerick) When Lizzie (Borden) saw what she's done Thought to herself that was so much fun So she whack them again And again and again Then laughed aloud at what she's done! Dorian Petersen Potter Aka ladydp2000 Copyright@2014 09.16.2014

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/20/2014 6:42:00 AM

That was a gruesome story wasn't it..Enjoyed the limerick about it..Thanks for the visits to my page..I probably won't be on for a few days maybe a week..Sara

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 9/21/2014 6:16:00 PM

Yes, that was so much so, Sara. Thanks for drooping by and comment. Have a great day! xxxx ad.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 9/16/2014 8:25:00 AM

Heheheheh! Oh this is a clever, fun piece! Excellent limerick! Well done, Dorian. Pandita

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 9/16/2014 9:41:00 AM

Thank you! I am so glad that behind all the horror of this very sad tragedy you still got to capture the humor in this Limerick. Nice to know you think it clever and well executed. Always try my best when I write every single one of my poems, whatever form I employ. Hugs! xxxx D.