Living With Mother Nature's Bruise

We turned to each other when we heard on the news
Our daughters place of work, enduring mother nature's bruise
She worked on an island now swamped with wrath
To her we now travel to retrace her last path

To go there blind never knowing if she breathes
Thoughts think the worst as we subconsciously grieve
Our daughter, our life, as we make plans to depart
Facing hours of torment as our minds tear apart

To this island we head where she enjoys life to the full
Thinking back to her young years, learning in school
This paradise as she calls it, in the Indian Ocean
Our minds picture, her love to live notions

We step of the plane into a world far from home
Praying we find her, dead or alive, to never roam
To the north of the island, Aceh is it's name
Is this where we find her, with no one to blame

We reach the village, it's where our daughter calls home
Teaching the youngsters English along the beaches they combed
We wander dazed and confused, joining the crying and the grieving
Emotional rescuers surround us, they just keep on believing

Hand in hand we stare hoping, as our eyes glimpse the lost
Our daughters not there, as we join the emotional exhaust
Suddenly I feel a tugging on my sleeve
Lady lady, you my teachers mama, come with me please

Looking down, my eyes cascading with tears
A beautiful young girl, momentarily relieving my fears
Lady lady, please please, come with me please
To a makeshift hospital she takes us, our hearts so in unease

To a door we arrive, she cries, mama's teacher mama's teacher
As she is led away by the hospital preacher
We are greeted by a doctor, taken through corridors of death
The relieving earlier felt, now replaced by inner reft

The stench of death drifts, lost souls we feel crying
Resonating sounds echo, the last breaths of the dying
Cubicle after cubicle, every curtain our hearts run
In broken English, is she the one, is she the one

The second curtain from the last, the doctor once again opens
Despair and tears increase, parents lost in their hoping
Before us lies, a broken twisted bandaged soul
The tattoo on her ankle, I cry Nicole, it's our Nicole

Engulfed with emotions our cheeks streaming with tears
Viewing the earlier posters, parents losing their fears
Living this moment, realising their daughter has lived
As we look back to the pictures, knowing families are sieved

Words we will remember until the day we are gone
That moment we heard, is she the one, is she the one

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 9/9/2010 10:38:00 AM
Congratulations James on your win in Tavarus Moreland's contest "Is She The One". Love, Carol
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Date: 9/3/2010 8:35:00 PM
i don't think there are words that i know to describe such writing.
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Date: 9/3/2010 1:39:00 PM
Congrats James on your winning poem in Tavarus's contest.. an amazing poem.. enjoy your special super win today.. happy and safe holiday weekend..with luv..
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Date: 7/16/2010 8:54:00 PM
WoW .. is this true? I am in tears reading it and feeling your intense pain.. then I see it is for the contest.. brilliant James.. u are a great story teller.. good luck.. and if true.. good luck again.. with luv..
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Date: 7/16/2010 3:46:00 PM
Great write, James, grabbed my attention and drew me in and held me...Good luck in the contest if it is an entry ....Sara
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Date: 7/16/2010 3:42:00 PM
Great write of a very sad time... My thoughts and prayers are will all this has touched.. MIchael
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