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Living Room Floor

November light and colors stream in through the window and I notice it, like in the eye of a storm, a whirlwind that has included pain and creativity but always distraction – of strivings and graspings at accumulation and accomplishment. And in a moment – of sun, sound and color – it all settles to be just this; Everyone, everywhere burning like so many points of light like on a Christmas tree, connected by strings amid the tinsel and baubles and homemade ornaments of meaning. Light that knows no division of inside or out, me or you, us or them. (11/2/2010, from my first collection of poems and stories, THE HEART OF IT, 2015)

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Date: 9/8/2023 7:32:00 PM
This is a great poem James. Very well written and creative. I like the imagery and particularly the last couple of lines. So enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. Warmest wishes.
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Date: 9/9/2023 6:02:00 AM
Thanks Christina. It's kind of cryptic for context - at this point I'd been spending about a month waiting for back surgery (ruptured disc) most of it camped out on the living room floor - in a lot of pain - oil painting all day, every day. The surgery happened another 3 weeks after this poem, and then I had another 4 months off from work in recovery - still doing my painting retreat

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