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Living On Routine Time

When a small, wee child I was taught at home and school how to tell time correctly. Before those lessons time spoke only of today, yesterday or tomorrow, and consisted of uptime, lunchtime, go home time, dinner, ‘jamas and bedtime. Child favored times were Christmas and birthday excites after long months of dreaming. Once a teenager time varied school and free times while each age brought distinct change. Then came adulthood when time blurred years in fast flight without any distinctions. I soon realized it was routine that merged years for its sameness is a thief. When routine rules time our same weekdays just repeat to end on the same weekend.
... CayCay July 16, 2019

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Date: 7/22/2019 3:04:00 PM
You sum life up so perfectly - congratulations CayCay, a gem as always! Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 7/22/2019 9:27:00 AM
What a wonderful poem CayCay! Congrats on your win
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Date: 7/22/2019 5:33:00 AM
- It's about enjoying time - Congratulations on your wonderful win, CayCay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/21/2019 8:16:00 PM
Congrats!! on your well-deserved win CayCay...^WW^ :o)
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Date: 7/21/2019 6:57:00 PM
I learned to adapt and treasured my days off with my children as they treasured having me home. It was an exciting job but I would have rather spent more time at home when my children were very small. Your lovely poem took me down memory lane. Thank you for the memories. xxoo
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Date: 7/21/2019 6:54:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win CayCay! I have never experienced true routine in my life. My childhood spent going to 15 different schools, each one with their own specific rules. Then stepping into a job where I was on call never knowing where I might end up. Having to bid for hours each month in order to capture some sense of stability with my flight schedule. Contd.
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Date: 7/21/2019 5:56:00 PM
Time moves so swiftly..Congrats on your win CayCay..
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Date: 7/20/2019 7:07:00 PM
very creative write for that image! Time flies by so quickly that we will miss it if we don't stop and admire it in fragments! Enjoyed this nicely penned poem :) hugs
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Date: 7/17/2019 8:00:00 PM
Your line:'when time blurred years in fast flight' so aptly describes how time flies as we age. What a great entry for the contest CayCay! I think this will end up high on the winner's list. It was so nice visiting with you. Have a great night. xxoo : )
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Date: 7/17/2019 11:01:00 AM
Your poem describes the passage of time so well for the different times in a persons life. It is truly a shame time can be lost and pass by fairly quickly without realizing it, due to the repetitiveness we can become accustomed to. I fined that type of poem to be completely out of my range to write. I could be wrong and stepping out of line, but I didn't see the number of the Image you based your work on. I took it was the clock, number 6. Good luck in contest! _ Mike
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Date: 7/17/2019 4:38:00 AM
Maybe be good for a while...but after a time looping you can truly waste your time... Good luck...
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Date: 7/17/2019 12:08:00 AM
I love the message of your poem. Well penned! Good luck in the contest too.
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