Seren Roberts Poet Alliteration

Living Life

Behaviour begets the way we are
Naughty nuptials enhance life's joys
Bringing major manifestation to ones soul
To live life with love and devotion
Endearing oneself only to enjoyment
Forgetting false thoughts of immorality
Living life as a lover, friend,
Behaving, badly not worthy of a thought
Living, life well has its memorable memories 


Penned - 07/07/2014

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Andrea Dietrich July 13, 2014 at 9:33 AM I can't remember which contest this was in of Dr. Ram's, but I congratulate you on your win, and I enjoyed your poem, Seren. Response to your soupmail coming. Seren Roberts July 13, 2014 at 1:35 PM Thanks Andrea and for the soupmail, lol ...Seren

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri July 13, 2014 at 3:57 AM Congrats on a greater win! Yes a moral life's in matrimony is beta n safer my friend. Tak care. Seren Roberts July 13, 2014 at 4:51 AM Thank you and yes what you write is true.... seren

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 13, 2014 at 2:51 AM Wow great one Seren ! Living life great wid love n devotion,, masterpiece,, congrats on top win! Seren Roberts July 13, 2014 at 3:06 AM Thank you so much Dr Upma, was a nice surprise .....Seren

Olusegun Arowolo July 13, 2014 at 2:11 AM Wonderful and Interesting piece,Seren...Congrats on your well deserved win..... Seren Roberts July 13, 2014 at 3:07 AM Many thanks for your kind words ....Seren

Reason A. Poteet July 12, 2014 at 11:36 PM Congratulations, Seren, memorable memories are worth the effort it takes. Naughty nuptials is a brainful. I enjoyed your piece, Dr. Ram did too; he thanked me for it. I am happy for you. Seren Roberts July 13, 2014 at 3:08 AM Hmmm not sure I know what your end comment meant....thanks for the congrats.....Seren

Mohan Chutani July 12, 2014 at 10:47 PM Living life fully from all its angles, beautiful write and win, Seren. Mohan Seren Roberts July 13, 2014 at 3:09 AM Hello Mohan, many thanks ....Seren

Arlene Smith July 12, 2014 at 7:56 PM Congrats on a great win, Seren! Hugs.. Arlene Seren Roberts July 13, 2014 at 3:10 AM Wow Arlene am so surprised, thanks for your congrats....Seren

Joyce Johnson July 12, 2014 at 3:01 PM This was fun wasn't it? Congratulations on a great win. Love, Joyce Seren Roberts July 12, 2014 at 7:00 PM Yes Joyce it was fun, had same letter words running through my brain .... thanks for the congrats ...Seren

Faye Gibson July 12, 2014 at 10:17 AM Great write, Seren. Congratulations. Seren Roberts July 12, 2014 at 10:48 AM thank you Faye, I enjoyed writing that form ...Seren

Richard Lamoureux July 12, 2014 at 8:02 AM Almost forgot, congratulations. Seren Roberts July 12, 2014 at 10:47 AM lol thanks again ...Seren

Richard Lamoureux July 12, 2014 at 8:02 AM I heartely agree. Seren Roberts July 12, 2014 at 10:47 AM thank you Richard ...Seren

Tim Smith July 12, 2014 at 6:54 AM A tremendous alliteration Seren...congrats Tim Seren Roberts July 12, 2014 at 10:47 AM Thanks Tim. first one I have attempted am quite pleased with myself. ....Seren

Dr.Ram Mehta July 12, 2014 at 5:05 AM Nice thoughts with fine alliteration, Congrats on the first place win, Seren Seren Roberts July 12, 2014 at 10:46 AM Thank you Ram. put a smile on my face .....Seren