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Living a Dream

Two silhouettes toe-tapping on an enchanted moonbeam A nighttime romantic dalliance Two starry-eyed lovers, so much in love So living a dream Their love has this kind of feel --- a touch of soft fleece fantasy, a taste of honey flavored surreal They got a love that flows deeper than the waters falling down the mountains of Paraguay Lots of cool peppermint kisses on a cold winter's day Two hand-in-hand lovers, so much in love, So living a dream Just a happy monsieur and his smiling fraulein They have a love that floats higher than two snow geese flying across the Himalayan sky at twilight Plenty of hot chocolate kisses on a tropical summer night Their love has this kind of feel --- a touch of satin and velvet embrace, a taste of saffron lips cinnamon laced Two blooming tulips dancing on a morning rainbow sunbeam A lifetime romantic fragrance Two bright-eyed lovers, so very much in love So living a dream, living the life they they always dreamed of

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Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 11/12/2016 6:24:00 PM

Wow, this poem is just oodling with love and romance Freddie! Love the hot chocolate kisses line especially! Very romantic!:)

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/12/2016 8:30:00 AM

WoW! Freddie, This is sooo beautiful and romantic. I got up in the magic of this write. I good feel the deep love in every line. Did I say it was romantic? I found this write to be very poetic as well. The imagery and metaphors were amazing. I wish I would have thought of somes of stanzas you wrote.I think it's one of your best pieces. I could go on and on about this write but I will end here. Excellent job. A without doubt seven and a fav:-) Alexis

Phil Capitano

Date: 11/12/2016 7:15:00 AM

Sounds like a great place to be, sign me up. This poem drips with love.

Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 11/12/2016 8:38:00 AM

Sorry, Phil. I must have hit the wrong key or something. Thought I was sending it to my man Rick. My bad. Love you though.

Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 11/12/2016 8:35:00 AM

Ty, Rick. Yeah, they are quite a lucky pair. My pen was even envious of them. Heh heh heh. It's all good over on this side of the world. Ty for asking. Have a blessed day, my dear friend. Much love to you.

White Wolf

Date: 11/12/2016 6:54:00 AM

Those lucky lovers! I feel like some hot chocolate now, but it's past my bedtime. Mind you, it's poetry like this that keeps me up and pumping. Hope all is good on your side of the globe RW. Great write mate.