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Living A Dream

I have always felt that love wasn't real, no matter what other people may say. And I wondered: is it love that folks feel, or is it the body's hormones at play? Is love real, or more like papier-mache, a collage of hopes that easily fray? I turned to family to seek love there, and yet I found nothing but tears and pain. Never having felt loved, it seemed unfair that I kept failing again and again. I felt no affection, only disdain, and whatever hopes I held were in vain. I looked to friends for love, to no avail, for though often spoken, it was all lies. I believed love to be a fairytale, till I met you, and you opened my eyes. You swore love was real, to trust my heart: and I fell in love with you from the start. To love, and be loved, is living a dream, and I'm so happy, I just want to scream.
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Delaney Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 8:45 AM
Fun form and interesting how it allowed you to explore the subject of love. Must give Lullo’s form a try. SuZ
Pinet Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 8:53 AM
Thanks Suzanne, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Agustin Avatar
March 29, 2019 at 4:54 AM
Thanks for the example, and likewise the message. God bless you.
Pinet Avatar
March 29, 2019 at 8:10 AM
Thanks Beata, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Scars Avatar
March 29, 2019 at 4:04 AM
Beautiful poem fro a wonderful poet..I am honored you used my created form. Thank you very much sweet Emile :)-luloo
Pinet Avatar
March 29, 2019 at 8:10 AM
Thanks so much Lu Loo, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
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