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Lives We Have Printed

Lives We Have Printed By Dane Smith-Johnsen Lives we have printed were written greatly with rhyming thrust. When wreaths of laurels scented beguile the richest dreams with lust, fragrance glorified bows to trust. Poetic form English Quintain: rhyme scheme a,b,a,b,b Written for Brian Strand’s Poet Laureate contest October 24, 2009

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Anthony Nutter

Date: 11/7/2009 3:22:00 AM

I wish I had your talent. Excellent piece. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit

Audrey Haick

Date: 11/5/2009 9:28:00 PM

Congratulations Dane Ann! Peace and love, Audrey

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/4/2009 4:40:00 PM

Gee, Dane, I guess I missed this when Barbara was here. It's brilliant! Not surprising you were successful in the competition. Love you, Carolyn

Joyce Johnson

Date: 10/31/2009 10:57:00 PM

Great job and congratulations on your win. Joyce

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 10/31/2009 8:19:00 PM

Dear Dane Ann, Congratulalions on YOUR well Deserved Honorable Mention in Brian's Contest I set the Laurel Wreath Upon YOU Long ago a awesome WIN LOVE YOU ALWAYS...HG

Pamela Griffiths

Date: 10/31/2009 10:20:00 AM

Congrats nice poem. Pam.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/29/2009 6:00:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Dane-Ann. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/28/2009 3:34:00 PM

Congratulations, Dane-Ann, and bravo for your winning poem ... well written .. great job .. beautifully stated.. bravo.. I am honored to be on the same podium with u as honorable mention in Brian's contest.. thankxxx for your kudos to me.. Linda-Marie

Donna Golden

Date: 10/28/2009 11:41:00 AM

Love it! This is filled with impact to each of the senses! It amazes me how so few words can do that, but you have managed it! Hugs and contratulations, DaneAnn! Love, Donna

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/28/2009 11:05:00 AM

Such a lovely quintain, Dane Ann. Congratulations on this wonderful entry in the contest! ~ Carrie

Elaine George

Date: 10/28/2009 10:33:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest, Dane Ann. Love, Lainie

Brian Strand

Date: 10/28/2009 9:01:00 AM

Congrats on you success in my contest.Rgds Brian My latest contest ADAPTION is now open .

Gert W. Knop

Date: 10/25/2009 2:51:00 AM

Terrific these lines, Dane Ann! And thank you for your words commenting "The Sea". I have just put the German version of "The distance is fragile" (English version on soup by 29/6/09). Ojalá que le gusta también! Gert

Constance La France

Date: 10/24/2009 6:24:00 PM

Beautiful words... good luck in the contest... and thank you so much for your comment on my poem .. From Within...

James Fraser

Date: 10/24/2009 5:14:00 PM

Terrific Quintrain Dane Ann, i'd be surprised if this was not on the podium, best of luck in the contest >> James

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/24/2009 4:39:00 PM

You have email!!! Nice effort above very nice!!! Light & Love

Date: 10/24/2009 2:28:00 PM

What an interesting perspective in this poem. So creative! Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind comment. Keep on writing!! Karen

John Freeman

Date: 10/24/2009 12:01:00 PM

This is masterful, my Lady McBeth. So truly authentic, no repentance!Smile, a favorite for me. Sincerely, Love, Moses

Elaine George

Date: 10/24/2009 9:54:00 AM

Dear Dane Annn . This is simply MAGNIFICENT!!!!! A POET LAUREATE MASTERPIECE! Straight to my favorite's. Lainie

Brian Strand

Date: 10/24/2009 8:28:00 AM

Thank you for supporting my contest Dane.Rgds Brian

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/24/2009 8:11:00 AM

Lives we have printed,were written greatly with rhyming thrust..beautiful my good friend--Charma

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/24/2009 7:26:00 AM

What a lovely entry to Brian's contest. As a poet, you have written this lovely dedication to poetry and those who love it! ~ Love, Carrie....Good luck with this one!! ~ Love, Carrie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/24/2009 4:42:00 AM

Interesting write. Keep writing. Sara