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Live Laugh Love (Caressed By Moonlight)

Listening to your heartbeat I lie with my head on your chest Voile curtains softly billowing in the breeze from the open window Ecstasy still flowing through our veins Lately we have become much closer A true friendship now mingles with physical attraction Unimpaired by our past lives Gently, you curl your arm around me as you sleep How truly happy that makes me feel Light from a waxing moon creeps in Over your sleeping form Verifying my adoration of you Even now, I can’t believe how lucky I am to have a life so full of love and laughter. **Too bad it's not autobiographical ;) ** for the LIVE LAUGH LOVE contest

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James Fraser

Date: 7/16/2010 11:27:00 AM

Sharon, I so enjoy your poetry. It's always such a pleasure to read. Have a lovely weekend >> James

Susan Mills

Date: 7/16/2010 12:05:00 AM

adoration is so sweet and endearing. Lovely acrostic. A winner in my mind. Love, Susan

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/15/2010 9:50:00 PM

Hey did it not make it into the contest in time, Sharon? I don't see any congrats on it and my gosh, it is one of the best ones of all. I know you have been having problems getting your poems to stay entered into contests. Is this happening to you still??? Please let me know! Luv, Andrea

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/14/2010 9:44:00 PM

This is the most beautiful one I have seen, Sharon. So pretty. ONe thing I heard about acrostics, the title should be the same as the words spelled out, but I doubt people pay attention to that. LUv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/12/2010 7:50:00 PM

It's wonderful write full of romance with nice Acrostic. Good luck in the contest

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 7/12/2010 5:41:00 PM

A great write, good luck in the contest, I enjoyed the read. Caryl

Virginia Mitchell

Date: 7/12/2010 1:55:00 PM

Wonderfu, romantic word picture! Good luck in the contest : )

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/12/2010 12:45:00 PM

btw yup I am baffled as well on where time went? Hmm could it mean that the past couple of years meant we had a lot of fun? I hope so, if it's with regards to our writings and friendship ;) -- enjoy your evening now :) and keep coming up with your amazing poetry :)!!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/12/2010 12:42:00 PM

Amazing, Sharon! haha I didn't notice it was an acrostic until I read your note below!! This is really great! & Who knows? Maybe it can come true one day? Well keeping my fingers crossed for you :) wish you the best in the contest :) -- nikko :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/12/2010 12:01:00 PM

Excellent Sharon ..good luck in Tirzah's contest with your terrific Acrostic.. truth in every line when someone special is in your life.. I KNOW!! my entry is "Triolette" and Lasting Love tells it all posted this morning.. good luck .. with luv...

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/12/2010 11:27:00 AM

Hehe, one can wish hey, really enjoyed this.. All the best for the contest, luv Wilma

Diiamond Rich

Date: 7/12/2010 11:08:00 AM

Enjoyed this poetry from you today and will read more, please check out my recent Criminals part 3 of course Fiction. Have a great day.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 7/12/2010 10:28:00 AM

sweet thoughts!! enjoyed reading today. enjoyed...I just made a wonderful meal...Peach, tender green beans out of my garden, baby squash, lemon, carrot and lobster sauteed with spices...oh yummy!!

Francine Roberts

Date: 7/12/2010 10:21:00 AM

wonderful piece, good luck in contest