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Little Stream

Little stream of water, how gentle and clear you are, as I watch you slowing flowing to places I wish I could journey to. wrote 11-20-08

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James Fraser

Date: 4/3/2011 8:01:00 AM

Delightful short piece James, love it....:)

Chitra Lakhera

Date: 11/22/2008 3:14:00 AM

This is such a beauty to behold!! I'll tell you a story :) There's a cave far away, inside it water is always flowing..even if there were a drought. They say, in place of water, milk used to be there years ago. Due to some selfish people and due to course of time, the flow of milk disappeared and is only water now. I wonder where that water comes from coz the cave is all underground and covered fully:) This certainly sent me back there!! Take care always:) Love, Chitra

Michael Torres

Date: 11/21/2008 9:06:00 PM

Very creative. Really enjoyed. Michael Torres

Sharon Winter

Date: 11/21/2008 3:10:00 PM

The simplicity of your poems create the rarest beauty. Love, Shar

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/21/2008 2:56:00 PM

Yes....I often wonder where it goes! Lovely little poem, James! ~ Carrie

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 11/21/2008 2:42:00 PM

Very nicely done I love to listen to water! Laura :)