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Little Spider

Little spider climbing the tree so tiny and oh so care free. Searching for a yummy treat, so hungry, that you must eat. Outdoors is your home for now, fall is here, soon you will come in for chow. Crawling on us at night, thinking of it, is such a fright. Little spider go back to your tree, I ask you, and I make a plea. Knowing that is not to be, cold weather, is not your cup of tea. So little spider come on in, I will just go sleep in the den. wrote 10-6-08

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Deneen White

Date: 10/9/2008 3:27:00 PM

I am glad that you like spiders, I think they are creepy but this is still a nice write, take care D-nyce

Ed Coet

Date: 10/8/2008 10:42:00 PM

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Chitra Lakhera

Date: 10/8/2008 5:56:00 AM

wow this was so lovable and sooooo cute:) Seems like I too plea them to leave:) its so frightening for me...Love, Chitra

Lacy Verret

Date: 10/7/2008 12:51:00 PM

Lol This was a cute and endearing little peice.Loved it.Hope you read some of mine just posted like to know what you think. Lacy

Michael Jordan

Date: 10/7/2008 12:46:00 PM

James this poem shows just what a loving heart you have my friend - Big as the whole outdoors I reckon - I've been worried about you how have you been - Always in my thoughts and prayers - God Bless

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/6/2008 7:56:00 PM

Cute poem....except the part of them crawling on you at night....eeeeek! I love your love of nature...even spiders!! Nicely done, James!~ Carrie

Michael Torres

Date: 10/6/2008 6:57:00 PM

James you had me laughing on this one. Nice write... God bless Michael

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 10/6/2008 4:25:00 PM

This is a very humorous piece. I can see the little spider crawling up the wall. I have zapped a few already. They have to find a warm place to stay; however, I need a warm place to stay too. I just love it. Great job! ~Joseph

Sharon Winter

Date: 10/6/2008 3:23:00 PM

~lol~ Very cute! Yes, it is getting that time of year and I am not fond of spiders creeping on me, or being anywhere near for that matter. But I cannot kill them either, well, most of the time anyway. You are very kind in your last verse. : ) Love, Shar