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Little Puff Puff and the Magic Castle- Part 2

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Thus we follow little Puff Puff brave and true, For the Castle of Magic was within her view… She will journey far under the skies of blue, When she gets there, will she know what to do? The Dragon Queen was angered and sent her men, To look for little Puff Puff for she had escaped again… “No one shall leave the Queen” from her Dragons den, Huffing & puffing letting loose a fireball now and then… Yet little Puff Puff journeyed tranquil and quite serene, Unknowing she had tempered her Grandma, the Queen… She decides to rest upon a rock near a relaxing ravine, She sees movement followed by a silent smoke screen… “Hi” a welcoming smile, “I’m Heidi the holographic fairy” Created by the Queen for the forest to be rather scary… Over time she had become kind & gentle on the contrary, Thus venturing together toward the Castle joyful & merry… Just behind them the Queen’s henchmen Victor & Gershon, Protectors of the land who would tickle you upon desertion… “Stop! Now, by the Queen’s command, your exiling exertion” The men being weary, asked to tag along in their conversion… Off they went, now a foursome to reckon as happy as can be, The Castle a stone throw away, with water above their knee… Puff Puff & her crew decided to cross the water in their spree, But it was too much for Victor & Gershon for they had to pee… The Castle in sight, the drawbridge opens observing the team, Slowly tippy-toeing in, huddled together they hear a scream… Before them stood a magnificent creature out from the steam, “State your business, for I am Illuminatra the Empress supreme” ...to be continued...with more characters!!! Oct.14.2019 Composed by Winged Warrior Background...Internet Composite Two-Headed Dragons & Little Puff Puff...Illustrated by Winged Warrior Background Music...Children's Fairy-Tales from the Internet With a female virtual voice The story is based upon Aklia, Brenda Chiri's beautiful granddaughter Thanks to everyone for their comments & making this poem POTD

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/12/2019 12:53:00 PM

Hello Winged Warrior, I like this story form in this poem. Have a nice day my friend.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/24/2019 6:16:00 AM

Congratulations on POTD, W.W.!

Winged Warrior
Date: 10/25/2019 3:47:00 PM

Thank you, Kimmy...^WW^ :o)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/21/2019 12:39:00 PM

Congratulations on having this delightful fantasy poem honored with POTD WW! I have been away visiting my granddaughters and am a bit behind, trying to catch up. Have a wonderful week! : ) xxoo

Winged Warrior
Date: 10/21/2019 5:11:00 PM

Thank you so much dear Connie...and welcome back...hope all is good my friend...sending poetic love...^WW^ :o)

Charles Messina

Date: 10/19/2019 8:05:00 AM

This is amazing and brilliant WW, I can read your poetry all day long my friend. Just wish I had the time of late. Awesome, Awesome, Awesome. Belated congrats on POTD. Love & Peace ~CM

Winged Warrior
Date: 10/19/2019 8:22:00 AM

Hey Charles, nice to hear from you my bratha...thank you kindly for your compliments...and I can read your compliments all day too lol...^WW^ :o)

Curtis Moorman

Date: 10/18/2019 10:51:00 AM

Well, you really 'jigged' first class on this one. But, of course, what else is expected by the second best 'jigger' on Soup?!!! lol

Winged Warrior
Date: 10/18/2019 11:57:00 AM

Well! well! well!...if it isn't my jumping jigging juggernaut friend, Curtis...glad to hear from you old bud...how they hanging?... your legs, of course lol...and thank you for the jigging compliment lol...your pal John aka ^WW^ :o)

Dean Wood

Date: 10/17/2019 11:03:00 AM

Ooo! Illuminatra! Can't wait to see how this continues!

Winged Warrior
Date: 10/17/2019 11:20:00 AM

Me too! lol...Thank you kindly Dean...^WW^ :o)

Panagiota Romios

Date: 10/17/2019 6:53:00 AM

I missed your POTD yesterday. You really are a magnicent writer! And an inspiration, wow Belated congrats

Winged Warrior
Date: 10/17/2019 7:37:00 AM

Thank you kindly dear Pani...and you give me inspiration my friend...^WW^ :o)

Eve Roper

Date: 10/17/2019 12:41:00 AM

Great verse my friend congratulations on POTD.

Winged Warrior
Date: 10/17/2019 7:35:00 AM

Thank you so much, Eve...^WW^ :o)

Brandy Nicole

Date: 10/16/2019 10:13:00 PM

Awe, my Warrior with Wings has created a Cute Children's story. :) With Soupy Characters. So Sweet of you to write this for Brenda's granddaughter. My heart is smiling. Congratulations John, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy

Winged Warrior
Date: 10/16/2019 10:28:00 PM

Love your presence, my friend...your smile brightens my darkest night...and love the phrase "With Soupy Characters"...wouldn't be the same without you, Brandy...thank you my "Light Angel"...can you light up the way to the pizzeria?...its dark & stormy tonight...maybe you can stay for a bite lol...two angelic souls having a pizza...quite the sight lol...John aka ^WW^ :o)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/16/2019 9:31:00 PM

Congratulations on your POTD. What a story/poem. Will you do a book????

Winged Warrior
Date: 10/16/2019 9:42:00 PM

Thank you, my friend, Paula...I would love to do a book with more poetrysoup characters...maybe even you...but I'm afraid, I lack in that department of how to set it up...perhaps a youtube digital book?...^WW^

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/16/2019 4:01:00 PM

Congratulations for POTD WW :)

Winged Warrior
Date: 10/16/2019 9:36:00 PM

Thanks once more dear friend Heidi...or should I say the Holographic Fairy lol...^WW^

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/16/2019 3:26:00 PM

Bro bro, what a pleasure it is to return and offer my congratulations for your wonderful and well deserved recognition with POTD honors for this fantastical tale. I had a feeling this would be poem of the day.. such a great choice! Btw, who ranks higher on the totem pole, the Queen or the Empress supreme? Lol!! Inquiring sissy’s want to know :)) Love and light.. Illum <3

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/28/2019 4:22:00 AM

Congrats bro bro on the potd! So sorry I am late in my congrats! And sissy is here too! Oh my my my! Time for a celebration me thinks! But I had to come read this one more time and so glad I did or I would not have known of your potd!;)

Susan Ashley
Date: 10/17/2019 2:30:00 PM

Haha! Thanks for another cliffhanger, bro bro :)

Winged Warrior
Date: 10/16/2019 10:47:00 PM

I really have to thank the Angels for handing me the Lord's gifts...most of the times a blessing but other times a bit of a curse lol...plus they are the ones that gave me the name lol...as to who tops the totem...its- its- its...the angels are calling, got to go lol...bro bro :o)

Susan Ashley
Date: 10/16/2019 9:44:00 PM

Lol! I can’t wait for the next installment. I predict little Puff Puff will top the totem! Your heart and imagination knows no bounds, my dear bro bro. Btw, your illustration is absolutely beautiful! Your artistry amazes always <3

Winged Warrior
Date: 10/16/2019 9:33:00 PM

Thank you Illum (Sweet Susie)...wouldn't be the same without you dear friend...to, who ranks higher on the totem pole, the Queen or the Empress supreme?...well?, your going to have to wait sissy...it might surprise! you lol...bro bro :o)

Constance La France

Date: 10/16/2019 2:11:00 PM

WW congratulations on POTD with this excellent poem, well deserved !

Winged Warrior
Date: 10/16/2019 9:29:00 PM

Thank you, dear poetic sister, Dear Heart- Wiishkobe Ode...^WW^

Arturo Michael

Date: 10/16/2019 10:48:00 AM

Little Puff Puff...Great idea...Congratulations WW on POTD

Winged Warrior
Date: 10/16/2019 9:25:00 PM

Thank you once again Arturo...^WW^

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 10/16/2019 10:42:00 AM

I went back and read #1, and I can imagine Brenda making a book for her daughter out of these and the ones to come. Congratulations!

Winged Warrior
Date: 10/16/2019 9:24:00 PM

Thank you so much, Sunlite...^WW^

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 10/16/2019 9:41:00 AM

A delightful story...Congratulations on your POTD

Winged Warrior
Date: 10/16/2019 9:23:00 PM

Thank you kindly, Jeanne...^WW^

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 10/16/2019 9:01:00 AM

You amaze with your masterful pen! and you do deserve the honour of recognition.. Congratulations, Winged Warrior on your POTD! So much pleased to read your poetry.. Regards and blessings.

Winged Warrior
Date: 10/16/2019 9:22:00 PM

Thank you once more, dear Besma...^WW^

Chris Green

Date: 10/16/2019 7:56:00 AM

The perfect choice for POTD. Congrats my friend

Winged Warrior
Date: 10/16/2019 9:22:00 PM

Thanks again Chris...^WW^

Joseph May

Date: 10/16/2019 7:26:00 AM

You tell a great story Winged Warrior, Congrats on POTD

Winged Warrior
Date: 10/16/2019 9:21:00 PM

Thank you kindly, Joseph...^WW^

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/16/2019 5:13:00 AM

Congrats WW on poem of the day--very creative my friend.

Winged Warrior
Date: 10/16/2019 9:20:00 PM

Thank you, Vijay my friend...^WW^

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/16/2019 4:27:00 AM

A delightful POTD WW. Congratulations on your deserving honor! xxoo

Winged Warrior
Date: 10/16/2019 9:20:00 PM

Thank you dear Connie...^WW^

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/16/2019 3:46:00 AM

- A wonderful story :))) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior
Date: 10/16/2019 9:19:00 PM

Thank you, dear Anne-Lise...^WW^

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/16/2019 2:16:00 AM

What a lovely fairy tale W.W., you certainly have a creative imagination. A well deserved POTD honour. Tom.

Winged Warrior
Date: 10/16/2019 9:18:00 PM

Thank you, Tom (First responder for POTD!)...^WW^

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/15/2019 7:57:00 PM

Lol! Ohh, this is adorable, Puff Puff and her crew! She’s quite the little escape artist too.. Dear bro bro, how you enchant me with your fantastical story-telling. I feel honored to be the cliffhanger in part two of your amazing and magical saga. I can’t wait to see what I do with lil Puff Puff and her posse. I see our sissy loved it and I do too! Someday Puff is going to find this to be simply fantastic! A fav! Your sane and now supreme sissy, Illum <3

Winged Warrior
Date: 10/16/2019 9:17:00 PM

Thank you sissy Illum (Illuminatra)...^WW^

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/14/2019 6:32:00 PM

LOL! Too funny!

Winged Warrior
Date: 10/16/2019 9:16:00 PM

Thank you, Kimmy...^WW^