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Little Palin Girl

little palin girl i saw your little world i saw the little momma the promise of i'm gonna be a great woman someday you stole my heart from your mothers part when i saw your hand lick your babys head my soul said STOP! didn't you watch everywhere that babys been from wishful mother then to father then to next of kin little palin girl i saw your world and speeches didn't matter some folks judge candidates by who's speech is better but one thing i saw and it caught my eye and i thought it was very clever i saw the love paul spoke about between you and your brother (Corinthians 13: 4-10)

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Diana Jackson

Date: 10/4/2008 6:39:00 PM

That was sweet I have to say I you have picked up on what is important....the rest is just blowing in the wind.....this kind of love is forever.....Diana

P Sheart

Date: 9/13/2008 3:48:00 PM

Hello John I watched this too! As I was watching Sara's little girl holding her baby brother, my heart was right there with her as she was stroking her brothers hair. I so enjoyed the moment...A foot-print in my mind I'll never forget as long as I live. This is a outstanding poem for you really have captured the beauty of the moment! A joy to read. Take care Love Light Truth Patricia

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 9/12/2008 8:47:00 AM

I was voting for Mickey until I actually checked up on Mrs. Palin. No more Mickey Mouse, I'll vote for Mrs. Palin and what's his name. God Bless. Vince

Karen Feist

Date: 9/7/2008 9:56:00 AM

Great observations! Wonderfully written! For a minute there, I was almost going to change my ticket. Glad I didn't move before the BIG REVEAL. Brilliant move, Mr. McCain! Touching write, John. It is also a 'revealing' of your gentle character. Who could not see the love in this family? Your poem describes it to a T. Thank you for taking the time to read my work. Your comments are more than welcome and give me that "my name in the lights" feeling! Thank you. love, karen

Maggie Huscroft

Date: 9/6/2008 7:22:00 AM

nice tribute John thank you for your comments on my poems x maggie

Brian Strand

Date: 9/6/2008 12:51:00 AM

Nice tribute here John.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Heidie Buys

Date: 9/5/2008 2:59:00 PM

So very well written. You capture so much emotion and beauty in this poem. Very well done. Regards Heidie

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 9/4/2008 7:14:00 PM

What an awesome poem! Yes, the Palin crew are amazing, and I cannot wait until they are helping run this country! Her, and her family are an inspiration, and this poem is so heartfelt and inspiring in its own right - well done, love Kristin

Deneen White

Date: 9/4/2008 3:51:00 PM

beautiful and upligting write, take care John, D-nyce

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 9/4/2008 3:36:00 PM

A great write, John. A very impressive poem -overflowing with feelings - enjoyed reading it. Thanks also for your welcome comments on my poem The Winds of Change. -Mohammad

Christy Hardy

Date: 9/4/2008 12:55:00 PM

I am so glad you wrote this poem...I saw her do that, and thought that was the sweetest thing ever...she seemed so protective of him.....I will always have that vision in my head...smile....love your work...Always, Christy

James Foulk

Date: 9/4/2008 11:31:00 AM

a very beautiful piece, and a great message. thank you for reading my poem and for your comment.

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/4/2008 8:10:00 AM

Yes...wasn't she a joy to watch, holding her little brother in her arms?..She easily could have stolen the whole show! Love has no politics..."and the children shall lead us"! ~Carrie

Michael Jordan

Date: 9/4/2008 7:01:00 AM

John this poem truly gave me a very peaceful feeling - Loved the verse out of the Bible at the end - God Bless John