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Little leaves

Little leaves falling down floating lightly without sound Keeping in touch with the wind in time sheltering plants beneath the ground. Floating slowly as the breeze picks them up fading away with seasons divine. Then looking up to the trees so high little leaves bloom from the branch to start again with a new season now as the flowers bloom and keep all sound the wind takes control and starts all over again. Written by:©Betty Bolden 7-10-04 All poems are copyright!©

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/8/2013 4:21:00 AM
Wow,wow Betty.i love it...so peaceful and natural...it made my day..i know i'll have a beautiful week :-)
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Betty Bolden
Date: 4/10/2013 6:35:00 AM
thank you lots
Date: 2/28/2013 9:16:00 PM
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Betty Bolden
Date: 4/10/2013 6:35:00 AM
!!!!!
Date: 2/20/2013 10:33:00 PM
this is a lovely little poem. Thanks for seeing one of my poems. I think you are new to me. Hope to see more of you!!
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Betty Bolden
Date: 2/21/2013 5:13:00 AM
very nice job on this..yes i just started here a week ago..God bless you
Date: 2/20/2013 6:42:00 PM
This is a terrific and remarkable write my friend! I loved reading this delightful poem this evening! What a divine piece, Great Work!!
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Betty Bolden
Date: 2/21/2013 5:14:00 AM
thank you so very much.
Date: 2/20/2013 3:30:00 PM
I love this! Especially the ending line. Well done :)
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Betty Bolden
Date: 2/21/2013 5:15:00 AM
thank you so much
Date: 2/20/2013 10:06:00 AM
The cycle is perpetual with the seasons. You have described everything nicely. Just one item: your word "tree's" in the seventh line needs no apostrophe since the word is only pluralized with no genitive or possessive case being present.
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Betty Bolden
Date: 2/21/2013 5:15:00 AM
thank you so much my friend.
Date: 2/20/2013 9:14:00 AM
Very nice pen picture!Thanks for reading my poem.
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Betty Bolden
Date: 2/26/2013 8:48:00 AM
your welcome..thank you for reading mine i hope you will return.
Date: 2/20/2013 8:21:00 AM
I love it....So light So true...So You.. Thank You
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Betty Bolden
Date: 2/26/2013 8:47:00 AM
God bless you