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Little Heart's Dream

He saw others soaring high in the sky, Sad he sat, then Water showed Him his Wings, Heart Leaped up With joy when He thought of flight Poor soul didn't know he was a duckling ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ (10-05-2020) (4 Double Tetractys Poetry Contest, sponsored by Eve Roper. *Placement in the contest: 01*

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Jennifer Fenn

Date: 12/3/2020 10:43:00 AM

Congrats on your win! What a cute poem. Now I am eager to try this form.

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 12/3/2020 10:44:00 AM

Good luck

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/2/2020 6:30:00 AM

We have to accept what we get don't we or do we? Enjoyed reading your winner. Thanks for dropping by my page. Sara

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 11/2/2020 6:33:00 AM

Not everybody is brave enough to accept the reality Sara. Some always want to be the impossible.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/29/2020 9:06:00 AM

Congrats Pagunda on your wonderful win in the contest. Sad for the duckling, but when he gets bigger he might be able to fly a little, some ducks do. An awesomely sweet poem my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 10/31/2020 5:56:00 AM

That's really sweeet of you Jennifer

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/17/2020 6:23:00 PM

Oh, I just adore the imagery and the emotion of your poem, Paghunda. The beautiful spirit of this piece touches my heart. Congratulations for your excellent win in Eve's contest.. ~Susan

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 10/31/2020 5:55:00 AM

So kind of Susan