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Little Heart's Dream

He saw others soaring high in the sky, 
                       Sad he sat, then
                         Water showed 
                               Him his
                                Wings, 
                                 Heart
                             Leaped up
                          With joy when 
                     He thought of flight 
     Poor soul didn't know he was a duckling

            ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ (10-05-2020) 

(4 Double Tetractys Poetry Contest, sponsored by Eve Roper.
                             
                *Placement in the contest: 01*

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Jennifer Fenn Date: 12/3/2020 10:43:00 AM Congrats on your win! What a cute poem. Now I am eager to try this form. Login to Reply Paghunda Zahid Date: 12/3/2020 10:44:00 AM Good luck

Sara Kendrick Date: 11/2/2020 6:30:00 AM We have to accept what we get don't we or do we? Enjoyed reading your winner. Thanks for dropping by my page. Sara Login to Reply Paghunda Zahid Date: 11/2/2020 6:33:00 AM Not everybody is brave enough to accept the reality Sara. Some always want to be the impossible.

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 10/29/2020 9:06:00 AM Congrats Pagunda on your wonderful win in the contest. Sad for the duckling, but when he gets bigger he might be able to fly a little, some ducks do. An awesomely sweet poem my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Login to Reply Paghunda Zahid Date: 10/31/2020 5:56:00 AM That's really sweeet of you Jennifer

Susan Ashley Date: 10/17/2020 6:23:00 PM Oh, I just adore the imagery and the emotion of your poem, Paghunda. The beautiful spirit of this piece touches my heart. Congratulations for your excellent win in Eve's contest.. ~Susan Login to Reply Paghunda Zahid Date: 10/31/2020 5:55:00 AM So kind of Susan

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/16/2020 7:15:00 PM Back with my congrats on your win. Well deserved. Login to Reply Paghunda Zahid Date: 10/31/2020 5:55:00 AM Humbled

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/16/2020 8:29:00 AM - Congratulations on your admirable win poem, Paghunda :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Paghunda Zahid Date: 10/31/2020 5:56:00 AM Thank you sunshine

Jan Allison Date: 10/16/2020 1:12:00 AM what a cute poem, congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Paghunda Zahid Date: 10/31/2020 5:56:00 AM Thanks Jan

Linda Alice Fowler Date: 10/15/2020 7:15:00 PM Teehee Paghunda! Cute write. Congratulations on the win! Linda Login to Reply Paghunda Zahid Date: 10/15/2020 7:17:00 PM Cute and sad as well... thank you Linda

Eve Roper Date: 10/15/2020 6:33:00 PM Congratulations on your win, Paghunda , a lovely poem. Thank you for participating in my Tetractys contest. Hugs Eve Login to Reply Paghunda Zahid Date: 10/15/2020 7:16:00 PM Awesome ... thank you

Silent One Date: 10/12/2020 5:02:00 AM Very clever thoughts... Login to Reply Paghunda Zahid Date: 10/15/2020 7:18:00 PM Cheers :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/10/2020 5:51:00 PM this is just adorable, Paghunda. Login to Reply Paghunda Zahid Date: 10/15/2020 7:21:00 PM So kind of you :)

Jesse Zerlaut Date: 10/9/2020 9:04:00 AM Well said and very creative. Good poem! Login to Reply Paghunda Zahid Date: 10/15/2020 7:17:00 PM Thanks a lot Jesse