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Little Gray Pirates

From crude wooden ships Made of twigs and leaves That sail in the wind Now moored in the trees Down from the crows' nest And over the sides They descend like raiders In camouflaged disguise Furry gray pirates Plunder and sift Nuggets pilfered in fall Ensconced in the drift No X's or paces On hand drawn maps Buccaneers dig kickshaws For cold winter fat Assiduous and nervous And always on alert For hungry bounty hunters Aware of their worth Threatened they scatter It's "All hands on deck" Retreating from danger Their lives are in check Back to the safety Of the moored ships that sway Make ready to sail And loot the next day An original poem by thr "poemdog" Daniel Turner

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/17/2020 9:27:00 AM
Wow DT. A great title and excellent poem. So well written. I see it was a winner. Well deserved. I love it :)
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Date: 7/18/2017 7:51:00 PM
I'm back,,, I do see that I did leave a comment last year.. still nicely done.
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Date: 8/10/2016 9:10:00 AM
Great analogy Daniel...I enjoyed the read...
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Daniel Turner
Date: 8/10/2016 9:21:00 AM
Thank you Joseph. This one was fun to write. I'm glad you liked it.
Date: 5/8/2016 9:11:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this wonderful write
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Date: 5/8/2016 6:13:00 PM
Daniel Congrats on your awesome win! Stop by my latest blog "Making A Difference." Enjoy and celebrate this win. With Love **SKAT**
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Date: 2/3/2016 6:38:00 PM
Great write, Daniel, I enjoyed reading a 7 :) Eve
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/3/2016 6:40:00 PM
Thank you, Eve. It was a fun write. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 1/30/2016 7:50:00 AM
Daniel, I will forever see the squirrels wearing bandanas and holding tiny knives in their teeth as they pace the decks of their maple tree ships. This is pissa.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/30/2016 7:53:00 AM
I am glad you liked it, just make sure your gold is stashed away. Please come by anytime. you are always welcome.
Date: 1/28/2016 11:07:00 PM
Very imaginative! Thank you for sharing.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/28/2016 11:09:00 PM
Thank you, Elaine. I really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.
Date: 1/28/2016 7:56:00 AM
Very adventurous and amusing poem expressed in fine sentences that impress and puzzle the mind, dear Daniel!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/28/2016 7:59:00 AM
Thank you my friend. Once again you have honored me with your presence and flattering comments. I appreciate you taking the time to read.
Date: 1/28/2016 7:13:00 AM
very well describes with your vibrant lines,daniel!..huggs
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/28/2016 7:17:00 AM
Thank you, Nette. I appreciate the flowers.
Date: 1/28/2016 6:28:00 AM
Very creative and sweet as well.......
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/28/2016 6:35:00 AM
Thank you, Archana. I really appreciate your support.
Date: 1/27/2016 9:53:00 PM
I really enjoyed this Daniel. This is a little masterpiece! #7
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/27/2016 10:01:00 PM
Thank you, Connie. I appreciate your kind words.
Date: 1/27/2016 9:37:00 PM
Awesome, I'm really going to enjoy following your work!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/27/2016 9:49:00 PM
Thank you again. I appreciate the flowers.

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