Little Gray Pirates

From crude wooden ships 
Made of twigs and leaves
That sail in the wind 
Now moored in the trees
Down from the crows' nest 
And over the sides
They descend like raiders 
In camouflaged disguise
Furry gray pirates
Plunder and sift
Nuggets pilfered in fall
Ensconced in the drift
No X's or paces
On hand drawn maps
Buccaneers dig kickshaws
For cold winter fat
Assiduous and nervous
And always on alert
For hungry bounty hunters
Aware of their worth
Threatened they scatter
It's "All hands on deck"
Retreating from danger
Their lives are in check
Back to the safety
Of the moored ships that sway
Make ready to sail
And loot the next day


           An original poem by thr "poemdog" Daniel Turner
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Sands Avatar
September 17, 2020 at 9:27 AM
Wow DT. A great title and excellent poem. So well written. I see it was a winner. Well deserved. I love it :)
Roper Avatar
July 18, 2017 at 7:51 PM
I'm back,,, I do see that I did leave a comment last year.. still nicely done.
May Avatar
August 10, 2016 at 9:10 AM
Great analogy Daniel...I enjoyed the read...
Turner Avatar
August 10, 2016 at 9:21 AM
Thank you Joseph. This one was fun to write. I'm glad you liked it.
La France Avatar
May 8, 2016 at 9:11 PM
Congrats on your win with this wonderful write
A  Avatar
May 8, 2016 at 6:13 PM
Daniel Congrats on your awesome win! Stop by my latest blog "Making A Difference." Enjoy and celebrate this win. With Love **SKAT**
Roper Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 6:38 PM
Great write, Daniel, I enjoyed reading a 7 :) Eve
Turner Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 6:40 PM
Thank you, Eve. It was a fun write. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Lawless Avatar
January 30, 2016 at 7:50 AM
Daniel, I will forever see the squirrels wearing bandanas and holding tiny knives in their teeth as they pace the decks of their maple tree ships. This is pissa.
Turner Avatar
January 30, 2016 at 7:53 AM
I am glad you liked it, just make sure your gold is stashed away. Please come by anytime. you are always welcome.
George   Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 11:07 PM
Very imaginative! Thank you for sharing.
Turner Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 11:09 PM
Thank you, Elaine. I really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.
Trifiatis Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 7:56 AM
Very adventurous and amusing poem expressed in fine sentences that impress and puzzle the mind, dear Daniel!
Turner Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 7:59 AM
Thank you my friend. Once again you have honored me with your presence and flattering comments. I appreciate you taking the time to read.
Onclaud Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 7:13 AM
very well describes with your vibrant lines,daniel!..huggs
Turner Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 7:17 AM
Thank you, Nette. I appreciate the flowers.
Garg Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 6:28 AM
Very creative and sweet as well.......
Turner Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 6:35 AM
Thank you, Archana. I really appreciate your support.
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 9:53 PM
I really enjoyed this Daniel. This is a little masterpiece! #7
Turner Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 10:01 PM
Thank you, Connie. I appreciate your kind words.
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January 27, 2016 at 9:37 PM
Awesome, I'm really going to enjoy following your work!
Turner Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 9:49 PM
Thank you again. I appreciate the flowers.
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