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Little Gray Pirates

From crude wooden ships 
Made of twigs and leaves
That sail in the wind 
Now moored in the trees
Down from the crows' nest 
And over the sides
They descend like raiders 
In camouflaged disguise
Furry gray pirates
Plunder and sift
Nuggets pilfered in fall
Ensconced in the drift
No X's or paces
On hand drawn maps
Buccaneers dig kickshaws
For cold winter fat
Assiduous and nervous
And always on alert
For hungry bounty hunters
Aware of their worth
Threatened they scatter
It's "All hands on deck"
Retreating from danger
Their lives are in check
Back to the safety
Of the moored ships that sway
Make ready to sail
And loot the next day


           An original poem by thr "poemdog" Daniel Turner

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/17/2020 9:27:00 AM
Wow DT. A great title and excellent poem. So well written. I see it was a winner. Well deserved. I love it :)
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Date: 7/18/2017 7:51:00 PM
I'm back,,, I do see that I did leave a comment last year.. still nicely done.
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Date: 8/10/2016 9:10:00 AM
Great analogy Daniel...I enjoyed the read...
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Daniel Turner
Date: 8/10/2016 9:21:00 AM
Thank you Joseph. This one was fun to write. I'm glad you liked it.
Date: 5/8/2016 9:11:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this wonderful write
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Date: 5/8/2016 6:13:00 PM
Daniel Congrats on your awesome win! Stop by my latest blog "Making A Difference." Enjoy and celebrate this win. With Love **SKAT**
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Date: 2/3/2016 6:38:00 PM
Great write, Daniel, I enjoyed reading a 7 :) Eve
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/3/2016 6:40:00 PM
Thank you, Eve. It was a fun write. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 1/30/2016 7:50:00 AM
Daniel, I will forever see the squirrels wearing bandanas and holding tiny knives in their teeth as they pace the decks of their maple tree ships. This is pissa.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/30/2016 7:53:00 AM
I am glad you liked it, just make sure your gold is stashed away. Please come by anytime. you are always welcome.
Date: 1/28/2016 11:07:00 PM
Very imaginative! Thank you for sharing.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/28/2016 11:09:00 PM
Thank you, Elaine. I really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.
Date: 1/28/2016 7:56:00 AM
Very adventurous and amusing poem expressed in fine sentences that impress and puzzle the mind, dear Daniel!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/28/2016 7:59:00 AM
Thank you my friend. Once again you have honored me with your presence and flattering comments. I appreciate you taking the time to read.
Date: 1/28/2016 7:13:00 AM
very well describes with your vibrant lines,daniel!..huggs
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/28/2016 7:17:00 AM
Thank you, Nette. I appreciate the flowers.
Date: 1/28/2016 6:28:00 AM
Very creative and sweet as well.......
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/28/2016 6:35:00 AM
Thank you, Archana. I really appreciate your support.
Date: 1/27/2016 9:53:00 PM
I really enjoyed this Daniel. This is a little masterpiece! #7
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/27/2016 10:01:00 PM
Thank you, Connie. I appreciate your kind words.
Date: 1/27/2016 9:37:00 PM
Awesome, I'm really going to enjoy following your work!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/27/2016 9:49:00 PM
Thank you again. I appreciate the flowers.

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