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climbing up the oak
on a breezy April morn
age just a number



* photo - still climbing trees at 67 like she did when she was ten


** haven't been feeling very inspired lately but wanted to post something 
     this one is more about the pic than the poem
     girls just wanna have fun - at any age

*** yes I know that line three is a cliche, no I don't care

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Date: 8/20/2025 11:21:00 AM
Hi Tom you're lovely wife is looking great, life is short so make the most of everyday God bless.
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Date: 8/20/2025 9:15:00 AM
What a fun photo! Poem fits it well!!
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Date: 8/20/2025 3:16:00 AM
We had a big gum tree in the backyard that stretched forever with many solid branches after another. I was always climbing it up to the age of 35. It got really scary towards the top! Beautiful haiku!
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Tom Woody
Date: 8/20/2025 4:40:00 AM
Ha true. I don't think she's ever aspired to reach the top. Thx for stopping
Date: 8/19/2025 7:56:00 AM
Clichés are used frequently in the public domain, are immune from copyright. I shall not note it every time I use it, nitpick all you want . Nice pic, I always wondered why such big men like little girls, can look funny ') Mia's lovely
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I Am Anaya
Date: 8/19/2025 9:52:00 AM
You're welcome, Mia--Haha, you should, I can't take it!
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Tom Woody
Date: 8/19/2025 9:28:00 AM
Mia thanks you :). Yeah just a note for the whiners and complainers. I should do a whole poem of just cliches. Heh
Date: 8/18/2025 5:56:00 PM
what a delightful Haiku, Tom. Impressive to be able to climb trees at 67. Nicely done
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Tom Woody
Date: 8/18/2025 6:03:00 PM
Yeah she's something. Thx
Date: 8/18/2025 2:34:00 PM
So many use that cliche in line three. Nothing wrong with that. So kool that you use it here, because it fits perfectly. :) Climbing trees is fun. Big girls enjoy being little girls, sometimes. :) I know I do. Such a wonderful pic and poem. I'm gonna act my age now. Maybe. Hehe
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Tom Woody
Date: 8/18/2025 2:41:00 PM
I'd love to see some of your fun/silly pics
Date: 8/18/2025 7:25:00 AM
Great photo. Doesn't look her age. Loved the haiku. I too find subjects difficult to write about.
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Tom Woody
Date: 8/18/2025 1:31:00 PM
Thx much Vic
Date: 8/18/2025 7:16:00 AM
I love it when people don't let age limit them and define them.It's really inspiring and wonderful. Age is really just a number. I read this somewhere, in french they say that I have 'age' years when they tell their age. They don't say I am 'age'. Which is so cool because when you say that I have 'age' years, it means that you have so many memories and life experience of what your age number is. So age is just a number, always keep your heart young. There's no age police :)
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Tom Woody
Date: 8/18/2025 1:31:00 PM
Thank goodness! Thx Anne
Date: 8/18/2025 5:40:00 AM
Stay active within reason as long as possible because the time will come if a person keeps on living when it won't be possible. Thanks for sharing this Senryu with us. I enjoyed both the picture and poem. Sara K
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Tom Woody
Date: 8/18/2025 5:42:00 AM
She just had a hip replacement 5/30. Won't be climbing for a while yet. Thx
Date: 8/18/2025 12:43:00 AM
Yeah you got that right, girls just want to have fun at any age Tommy. lol. Nice haiku as well...Hugs
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Tom Woody
Date: 8/18/2025 4:35:00 AM
I'll bet you're a fun one to hang with
Date: 8/17/2025 7:25:00 PM
Haha..it’s true! :D
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Date: 8/17/2025 6:56:00 PM
That’s right, Tom! I still love to climb and I’m 68 yrs. old, lol!! :)
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Tom Woody
Date: 8/17/2025 7:53:00 PM
You go girl!
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 8/17/2025 7:23:00 PM
Laura, shhhh! You’re 58!
Date: 8/17/2025 6:24:00 PM
Great limbs! I wonder does wifey not mind you publicly announcing her age (which incidentally, you must be mistaken) cos she doesn’t look it. If she’s 67 I’m Flash Gordon!
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 8/17/2025 9:30:00 PM
You Vulcans! Ponnfarr is a no-brainer, either you mate or face death. If it was say marry and mind meld or face death I could understand all the angst.
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Tom Woody
Date: 8/17/2025 7:52:00 PM
I've only experienced ponfarr nine times. Sigh
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 8/17/2025 7:27:00 PM
You’re just a youngster. 64 is like puberty in Vulcan years.
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Tom Woody
Date: 8/17/2025 6:53:00 PM
Flash Gordon? I had you in mind as the Joker
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Tom Woody
Date: 8/17/2025 6:51:00 PM
Ha! Neither of us are age shy. It is what it is, right? I just turned 64 on the 6th

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