Little Did I Know

An ill wind September brought
With a drizzle I did not savor,
My boot on the sidewalk caught
When luck did me no favor.

While dashing home, it was my belief
Foolishly and on a whim,
I dodged every slippery leaf
When with them I would swim.

I sat there, embarassed as can be
Wondering, what could be worse?,
Caressing my scraped knee,
Collecting my spilled purse.

A voice came from the skies
And asked if I could stand,
Above me stood his azure eyes
Outstretched was a helping hand.

The coldness was not subtle
And neither was the pain,
He pulled me from the puddle
And I did not mind the rain.

Little did I know that day
Just how a life can change,
How love can be born to stay
From a situation so strange.

Underneath the streetlights' glow
Kindness led me down the lane,
And how little did I know
That I could fall for the rain.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Loving Iii Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 7:24 PM
Of course you fell in love. good work
Deschler Avatar
May 6, 2023 at 6:51 PM
Thanks, John
Kendrick Avatar
November 15, 2022 at 3:55 AM
Oh! Wow!! I am left wondering was it a person who helped her up or did she fall in love with the rain. That is some good writing. Way to go. Thank you for sharing and for dropping by my pages. Sara
Deschler Avatar
December 4, 2022 at 10:19 AM
Thank you so much, Sara...
Andresen Avatar
November 13, 2022 at 11:25 AM
- Sounds like a day you'll never forget, Kelly ... beautifully written - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) -
Deschler Avatar
December 3, 2022 at 10:17 AM
Thank you so much :)
Gasun Avatar
November 13, 2022 at 2:05 AM
Such a well-written and stunning poem to share your unforgettable experiences/ surprises from the rain my dear friend Kelly. So delightful to read it this afternoon. Thanks for sharing and congratulations on your win! God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Deschler Avatar
December 2, 2022 at 10:33 AM
Thank you so much... Glad you enjoyed this one, Len!
Roper Avatar
November 12, 2022 at 11:36 PM
Back with congratulation :) Many blessing my friend
Deschler Avatar
December 2, 2022 at 10:29 AM
Thank you my friend!
Alex Avatar
November 12, 2022 at 8:04 PM
Great and enriching experience depicted beautifully. Congratulations!
Deschler Avatar
November 29, 2022 at 10:23 AM
Thank you!
Loving Iii Avatar
November 10, 2022 at 6:50 PM
A wonderful occurance. And put to poets words as it was ment to be.
Deschler Avatar
November 29, 2022 at 10:13 AM
Thank you John
Roper Avatar
November 10, 2022 at 12:33 PM
I love the imagery you've created in this verse. I remember a few times falling flat on my butt from unbalance, still do , not fun. Many Blessings my friend
Deschler Avatar
November 29, 2022 at 10:05 AM
Thank you my friend... Glad you enjoyed this one!
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