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Little Boy's Rhapsody

You suffered a fathomless and immeasurable death, guess my womb is the o n l y home you’ll ever know- You never got the chance to take your first breath, and this story ends in a perpetual eternity of woe. I remember trying to wake you by w i g g l i n g your toe. In blissful rhapsody your tiny body now lives, your final quietus grave is where I go to talk to you- I know it’s my pitiful self I must learn to f o r g i v e, see my world from a much different point of view. To all this m i s e r y I must learn to say “adieu”. So I return to my double life lived since you died, one part of me h e a l e d, the other not the same- When I tell others I am okay they know I lied, because deep down it’s always been me I blame. You're just an innocent boy without a s p o k e n name. In the depths of the shadows I w e e p and I mourn, for there is nothing else I’d rather be doing- I try to let go yet it seems my heart is still torn, now a wicked storm in my heart is brewing. I n e v e r got to hear you laugh loudly while cooing. Freedom from these s h a c k l e s shall never exist- as I remember your cold forehead I gently k i s s e d. 1. rhapsody 2. fathomless 3. quietus 4. eternity 5. story Five Words, Please - Poetry Contest Sponsor, Broken Wings March 12, 2018

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Date: 4/20/2018 11:30:00 PM
All the words I've written to broken wings I wish had time to write you.. My emotions as well as others have been deeply grieved, desire is to bundle you up and protect you and ease the loneliness of loss. So many familiar moments one can spend with you in this sad sad write. God's word explains why the guilt you speak of is not anyone's. Eccl says, 'Time and UNSEEN events befall us all" Not you nor God is to blame. Thanks for sharing your love. bbn
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Date: 4/9/2018 11:06:00 PM
Back with much deserved congrats, Laura, for your podium finish.
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Date: 4/2/2018 6:08:00 PM
Laura, congratulations on your win in my contest, oh you always get me weeping with your poems and this one touched my heart, I was with you in each word and line, for I too kissed a cold baby and go to his grave and try to say adieu but cannot . . .
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Date: 4/1/2018 3:12:00 AM
It brought a tear to my eyes, a very brave woman you are. Congratulations Laura, a special fave... Mick
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Date: 3/31/2018 7:48:00 PM
Deeply moving, this poem brings one to tears. So deserving your win, Laura!
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Date: 3/12/2018 2:23:00 PM
So very touching, Laura. Hauntingly lovely.
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Date: 3/12/2018 9:15:00 AM
absolutely heartbreaking LuLoo Constance will love your melancholy poem:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/12/2018 7:41:00 AM
This is so sad, you write melancholy so well and great storytelling.. I think BW will like this one..
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