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Littering

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Naani Form - 4 lines 20-25 syllables

branches littering driveway, splintered, some fat, all wet, toe-kicked into leaf gutters to give ground to tread

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Paige Hind

Date: 1/31/2024 1:58:00 PM

Cool! I could envision it.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/31/2024 5:57:00 PM

Great! Thank you, Paige!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 1/28/2024 1:11:00 PM

A vividly portrayed, well crafted poem. I got a kick out of it, Kim. :D

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/28/2024 1:57:00 PM

LOL, thank you! :)

Bill Baker

Date: 1/27/2024 9:54:00 PM

Nice writing to form, Kim. Great imagery. Bill

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/28/2024 4:20:00 AM

Thank you, Bill!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/27/2024 8:31:00 PM

Tread carefully now...

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/28/2024 4:21:00 AM

I will!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/27/2024 5:47:00 AM

Moments well captured, Kim. A storm left its mark, I am guessing.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/27/2024 9:56:00 AM

True! Thank you, Vijay!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/26/2024 3:14:00 PM

nice word play with 'littering'...liked it...need to look at this form...I may like it too...have a great evening, Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/26/2024 6:26:00 PM

I’m having fun with it!

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 1/26/2024 2:42:00 PM

Interesting littering! Have a nice time lovely Kim, best regards ~ AA

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/26/2024 6:26:00 PM

Thank you!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/26/2024 1:24:00 PM

Sounds like the aftermath of a storm Kim. Tom

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/26/2024 6:26:00 PM

For sure!