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with dripping desires the candle cries knowing as it's glowing it attracts the moth

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 2/28/2020 9:55:00 AM
if you want dripping desire just add a C to your title. ;0)
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 2/28/2020 10:45:00 AM
LOL I stole your suggestion Richard thanks.
Date: 2/24/2020 10:07:00 PM
Potent little poem, excellent piece Jeff, xomo!
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 2/24/2020 10:27:00 PM
Thank you Maureen. Melissa and I were just emailing and I told her I just wrote the last one, the old "impromptu" right then and there. I need to get back in the game lol

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