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Listening Is Loving

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OeJWKSbbq68 On the brush of morning a wisp of air a tendril round my senses, like sweet perfume Liquid skies that move with the waves of a soft whispering wind Calling the birds of the air, calling butterflies; Each jostled thought calms as my remote lips cup and my eyes feast on a clear view of one Godly, beautiful day* Special calls from ancient pine trees with arms loaded with pinecones and sentinel scents My oh my, how I love the early morning with all its aerate lawns and flower beds First glance, first kiss, first contact nature is cupping her velvet ear and listening to me, truly listening; As I gulp each morsel of peace it imparts, I know without doubt that have been truly love, this very morning. July 30, 2022 Mystic Rose Example for contest this morning.

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Date: 8/15/2022 2:30:00 PM
What a lovely write. You are truly loved and blessed with God's blessings.............
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Date: 8/1/2022 4:28:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this one today. It would be nice to live in such an area where everyone's flowers and lawn would be lovely. Good example. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 7/31/2022 4:42:00 PM
This is pretty... Rumi said: " Silence the language of God, everything else is a poor translation".
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Date: 7/31/2022 1:20:00 AM
Love and romance excel, I'm sorry I'm off contests these days. Too tired. Hugs
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Date: 7/30/2022 6:58:00 PM
Dusk here Vie...crickets begin their sounding rituals, raccoons slowly emerge (from the sewers here!) to canvass the neighborhood bird feeders & deer rise from hidden creek beds to do the same...love your poem, a sense of peace, thank you, needed tonite, ma's had a rough week, I'll tell you about it next café... she's a fighter...
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Date: 7/30/2022 2:49:00 PM
Hi Vienna, what a gentle piece of love in nature's embrace. You let your heart sing and one feels joy as one listens to your beautiful words. This is a special place in a special time. Has to be a fave. Have a wonderful evening. Hugs always ..... Mike. |XX
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Date: 7/30/2022 6:01:00 PM
thanks for reading
Date: 7/30/2022 6:35:00 AM
What an elegant visage of nature with her velvet ear. Such a beautiful poem Vie! Linda
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Date: 7/30/2022 6:00:00 PM
thanks for reading
Date: 7/30/2022 6:02:00 AM
Wonderful images of morning in voice of love!
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Date: 7/30/2022 6:00:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by
Date: 7/30/2022 5:14:00 AM
Beautiful. I love this. God bless you. Love, Gina
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Date: 7/30/2022 6:00:00 PM
Thank you for reading

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