09/07/25
LISTEN to the WIND
Second Place
Contest by Constance La France
"True Love is eternal, surpassing time and circumstances. " - Poet In my last phase sending an errand through wind requesting you to rewind reminiscences rippling on lost love of our bygone days. like shimmering sunrays in dimmed twilight with faded light as evening merging to night. My yearning is just to meet you to cast a glance and with apology and regards to put a complaint, how can you discard that of life once we spent together in rue and rapture ! Also to ask how to forget that you had won my heart. I wrote a note following your own quote " Our love is eternal surpassing flowing time " But circumstances separated us. Also, eternal time ignored our love Two lone hearts to explore journey of life. Blowing breeze is carrying my last wish to reach you. I have detached myself from earthly affairs. Not aware what's awaiting on after -life. Praying for unison on reincarnation.
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