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9/3/2025 for LISTEN to the Wind Poetry Contest sponsored by Constance La France

Listen to the Wind

"The answer is blowin' in the wind" ~ Bob Dylan, 1963

One fine day, I sat upon my hammock, swayin'.
I heard the breeze, and asked, "what are you sayin?"
 
    "Would you truly like to know?", he said with a gust, 
     "I'll tell you if I must", stirring up some dust. 

     I'm as old as the world.  I've seen all places.
     I recall everything that time erases. 

     I've visited battlefields and soldiers, brave,
     and cemeteries, with many a lonely grave. 

     I caressed Indian grass and cottonwood trees.
     I pushed ships carrying horses, guns, and disease. 

     I carried jasmine perfume aloft in the air
     and mussed up Rapunzel's long and golden hair.  

     I wafted through an orphanage where children play.
     I puffed Babe Ruth's called home run one October day. 

     There's just one remaining thing I forgot to say,
     The wind never gives anything away".

Yet, I understood not a word the wind had said,
for he blew me off my hammock onto my head.

Oh, what I'd know if it weren't that I were dead.
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La France Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 3:50 PM
David, congratulations on your win in my contest, Listen to the Wind, with your wonderful poem, I love the quote also, blessings
Crandall Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 3:54 PM
Thanks, Constance - I enjoyed the contest!
Poteet Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 10:30 AM
Funny and as Paula wrote: very creative. Loved your excellent narrative, talking with the wind. David, I offer congratulations on your fine piece as well as the placement in Constance's contest.
Crandall Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 3:53 PM
Thanks, Reason!
Goldsmith Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 10:11 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative write. Guess no more hammock riding for you in the wind. Hope your head is OK. Have a blessed day with your win...........
Crandall Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 3:51 PM
Haha, yup. - thanks Paula, have a great day!
Godwin Avatar
September 5, 2025 at 2:41 AM
My good, poetry gosh, David, YES, you can and you do write outstanding poetry with a seriously talented pen. This is divine, a joy to read and I simply can't stand you for being this gifted all your life and not even knowing it. Your imagination is boundless, and your imagery is thrilling. LOVE IT ... CayCay (as much as I appreciate your humor, you don't need it when you write like this, the poem would SHINE with or w/o it. Do u think sponsor looks for humor? Your capable call, of course)
Crandall Avatar
September 5, 2025 at 7:13 PM
Hi CayCay, thanks so much!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 3, 2025 at 4:50 PM
wow! amazing down to the last surprise line. faving
Crandall Avatar
September 5, 2025 at 7:12 PM
Thanks, Sara!
Flood Avatar
September 3, 2025 at 3:12 PM
I’d got wind of your passing, David… Blow me down if it wasn’t fake news. Got a good giggle out of that punchline. Enjoyed muchly.
Crandall Avatar
September 3, 2025 at 3:21 PM
Haha, yep, greatly exaggerated! Glad you liked it. I was found holding onto the bottom of the hammock for dear life.
Kendrick Avatar
September 3, 2025 at 2:30 PM
Ha!! Ha!! I got a chuckle out of this one. Thanks for sharing your humor with us. Sara K
Crandall Avatar
September 3, 2025 at 2:53 PM
Glad you got a chuckle, Sara!
Greenhough Avatar
September 3, 2025 at 2:20 PM
Lol. I like it. Just when I was admiring the wind, he went and toppled you . I hope you've recovered.
Crandall Avatar
September 3, 2025 at 2:52 PM
Thanks, Hilda! I outsmarted the wind by putting a seatbelt on my hammock!
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