Listen To the Warm

Listen to the warm


"It happens just because we need to want, and to be wanted to, when love is here or gone to lie down in the darkness.. and listen to the warm". ...Rod Mcuen


As the chills of extreme winter bite me through the night, I close eyes to visit my memorable past when you held me in your arms so tight, I could feel your breaths on my neck, skin next to mine and thumps of fastened heartbeats. Wantings craved to end tranquil as I listened to the warm. I then open eyes to find no one by my side, frozen frigid with dried up eyes that do not reply to any emotion anymore, I wait endlessly for your eternal touch that only could send some warmth. Me and you and our rhythmic beats of that time were the soul's treat... Those close walls if were able to speak will evince and further endeavour to seek... How inseparable souls and crossed our hearts, could time ever tear us apart ?
Written May 11th, 2016 For contest by Laura loo Now entered for "Your best poem from Laura loo's poetry contest"
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Dutta Avatar
May 17, 2016 at 1:49 AM
Congrats Upma to win on pretty warm prose. Love
Williams Gault Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 5:16 PM
The past was so beautiful if it could only be the present, such an emotive piece, wonderfully scribed. Congratulations!
A   Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 2:52 AM
Dr Upma, Congratulations on your "Warm-Prose Contest Win" XOX ~LINDA~
Hicks Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 12:16 PM
This has a gentle spirit, Upma. I've been away from the Soup and am not aware of what the contest is about, but I am really drawn to that title: Listen to the Warm.
Cheema Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 5:30 AM
Upma, congrats on your wonderful placement in Laura Loo's Listen To The Warm Prose Contest!
La France Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 11:35 PM
emotional and beautifully penned, congrats on your win
Devnath  Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 7:46 PM
A great congrats on your win with this beautiful poem filled passion my lovely friend my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
Grahamburglar Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 1:53 PM
Congrats on your win in the contest. This is well written and was a pleasure to read. -G
Scars Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 8:06 AM
Dr. Upma, a wonderful poem...thank you for being a part of my contest and congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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