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Listen To the Music

Dulcet notes Waft over upturned faces
Whispers of Splendor with such promise
The Lilting Eloquence of blended notes..
Imaging  Fragrant fields of Lavender
These Tranquil moments  of Bliss

                                  ...The gift of music




I missed the contest..but what the heck,
Ill post anyway. The faster I go..the behinder
I get. BG

Copyright © Barbara Gorelick | Year Posted 2010

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Tim Ryerson Date: 4/18/2010 9:23:00 PM Oh yeah, Barbara!...I'm a music freak too. Though I'm not a professional musician, I consider myself to be a 'professional listener' of music (Shoulda' been a music critic) Who cares if you missed the contest? The beauty and wisdom of the poetry is far more important...I recently missed one myself (As I have many others) but now will surely post it anyway! - Tim Login to Reply

Ralph Taylor Date: 4/15/2010 5:44:00 AM Great write - think you would have had a good shot at placing. Nice job anyway. P.S. Thanks for your comments. Have a good one - Ralph Login to Reply

Sean Kelly Date: 4/14/2010 10:43:00 PM And may your creative pen , play on & onnnn & onnnnnn , Barbara ..... Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 4/14/2010 10:11:00 PM Belated add - I too missed Shards of light contest. I am posting my poem anyway today. Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 4/14/2010 10:04:00 PM Sorry, to hear. All the ten words in such a compact box Login to Reply

Margaret Foster Date: 4/14/2010 6:10:00 PM Shame you missed the contest Barbara, I'm sure this would have been high in the judging. You have done a marvelous job using all the words in a relatively short verse and it reads like music. well done....Margaret Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 4/14/2010 1:51:00 PM Great job using the words required for Andrea's contest... sorry u missed it but u get an "A" for your effort BG... how is HG doing these days? recovering well I hope..luv.. Linda-Marie.. Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 4/14/2010 1:51:00 PM Forgot to say... why not "buy" him a "shining star" by entering my new contest posted... deadline is April 30th..luv.. Login to Reply

Faleshia Murphy Date: 4/14/2010 12:25:00 PM very nice write sure looks like everybody is in the music party mood today I better get off this computer and turn on my radio nice write loved it faleshia Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 4/14/2010 11:19:00 AM Great write that you have penned glad that you posted it ...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara Login to Reply

Daver Austin Date: 4/14/2010 11:16:00 AM That's a colorful tune you're weaving, Barb. Might be The Afternoon of a Faun. Love, daver Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 4/14/2010 11:15:00 AM Tobad you missed the contest, You would have done real good . Always enjoying. This time I get to read your comment to your self on the bottom of the poem you missed out on . Loving it anyways. Login to Reply