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Listen To the Music

Dulcet notes Waft over upturned faces Whispers of Splendor with such promise The Lilting Eloquence of blended notes.. Imaging Fragrant fields of Lavender These Tranquil moments of Bliss ...The gift of music I missed the contest..but what the heck, Ill post anyway. The faster I go..the behinder I get. BG

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Tim Ryerson

Date: 4/18/2010 9:23:00 PM

Oh yeah, Barbara!...I'm a music freak too. Though I'm not a professional musician, I consider myself to be a 'professional listener' of music (Shoulda' been a music critic) Who cares if you missed the contest? The beauty and wisdom of the poetry is far more important...I recently missed one myself (As I have many others) but now will surely post it anyway! - Tim

Ralph Taylor

Date: 4/15/2010 5:44:00 AM

Great write - think you would have had a good shot at placing. Nice job anyway. P.S. Thanks for your comments. Have a good one - Ralph

Sean Kelly

Date: 4/14/2010 10:43:00 PM

And may your creative pen , play on & onnnn & onnnnnn , Barbara .....

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/14/2010 10:11:00 PM

Belated add - I too missed Shards of light contest. I am posting my poem anyway today.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/14/2010 10:04:00 PM

Sorry, to hear. All the ten words in such a compact box

Margaret Foster

Date: 4/14/2010 6:10:00 PM

Shame you missed the contest Barbara, I'm sure this would have been high in the judging. You have done a marvelous job using all the words in a relatively short verse and it reads like music. well done....Margaret

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/14/2010 1:51:00 PM

Great job using the words required for Andrea's contest... sorry u missed it but u get an "A" for your effort BG... how is HG doing these days? recovering well I hope..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/14/2010 1:51:00 PM

Forgot to say... why not "buy" him a "shining star" by entering my new contest posted... deadline is April 30th..luv..

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 4/14/2010 12:25:00 PM

very nice write sure looks like everybody is in the music party mood today I better get off this computer and turn on my radio nice write loved it faleshia

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/14/2010 11:19:00 AM

Great write that you have penned glad that you posted it ...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Daver Austin

Date: 4/14/2010 11:16:00 AM

That's a colorful tune you're weaving, Barb. Might be The Afternoon of a Faun. Love, daver

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/14/2010 11:15:00 AM

Tobad you missed the contest, You would have done real good . Always enjoying. This time I get to read your comment to your self on the bottom of the poem you missed out on . Loving it anyways.