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Listen The vortex of deep ocean currents Pushing my foolish spirit Up towards the surface. Sounds echoed rising To perfect silence. And there I am alone. Try to listen To the music of the spheres. Can you hear anything? No friends No Enemies No lovers. Fear trembled in my invisible stomach. Yet I try to listen Who am I? As planets and stars twirl in the immense universe. Until a silent vortex of two stars in nova Send a nuclear quake, And disruption occurs As the old spirit is sent back to the abyss Of Earth’s Ocean. Try and find me now. Impossible!

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Date: 1/24/2024 9:19:00 AM
Wow. Leave a trail of bread crumbs Victor. :)
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Date: 1/13/2024 5:15:00 AM
We may not find you, but as long as you know where you are you will never get lost. Very nice...great writing, Victor.
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Date: 1/13/2024 12:52:00 AM
wonderful poem, everyone has a part of mystery, one favorite here have a wonderful week end
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Date: 1/10/2024 7:15:00 PM
A deep, spiritual reverie
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Date: 1/10/2024 1:57:00 PM
Who are we and what are we doing here?...must be a reason, or I hope. Good one Victor. One for thinking. Good eveningxxx
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Date: 1/9/2024 10:11:00 AM
what a spectacular journey you take us on Victor, but I hope I can always find you here on soup hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/9/2024 2:23:00 AM
We are just motes in this vast universe. When there is a kind of apocalypse, our souls will get separated from us and we will slip into the ocean of nothingness. A very profound poem, dear Victor. 'Who am I'.... this is a puzzling question and the most weighty question !
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Date: 1/9/2024 12:17:00 AM
Wow! This is definitely one of my most fave poems from you dear victor! Your diction and ethereal way of expressing and delivering such soul stirring lines is beyond impeccable! I love the opening and ending the most especially “ Who am I? As planets and stars twirl in the immense universe. Until a silent vortex of two stars in nova“ just love that! Fave!
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Date: 1/8/2024 4:44:00 PM
Whoa! What you been smoking Vic? Invisible stomach? Okay. Playing Waldo? Gotcha. This is quite different for you. Victor Buhagiar ala Timothy Leary. Interesting
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Date: 1/8/2024 3:16:00 PM
Great journey, but we will try to find you.
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Date: 1/8/2024 11:51:00 AM
Nicely done Victor..
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Date: 1/8/2024 10:02:00 AM
You have created a remarkably exquisite, and masterfully crafted poem. Its profound nature evokes a profound contemplation in the reader's mind. The composition is both enlightening and captivating, as the artful arrangement of lines weaves a mesmerizing tapestry of thought. Remarkably introspective, this poem exemplifies your consistent excellence in writing.
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Date: 1/8/2024 8:39:00 AM
I loved this poem. Star explosions are fascinating. Thanks for such a big picture.
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Date: 1/8/2024 8:10:00 AM
You sound lost in the Universe and in earth’s abyss. We will find you, my friend, and the dear Lord always knows where you are. Hugs ~ Kim
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Date: 1/8/2024 7:12:00 AM
Wonderfully done though it is such a deep poem, inviting the reader to truly think. God bless you Victor. Love, Gina
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Date: 1/8/2024 6:05:00 AM
Deep in thoughts, Victor. Highly reflective poem. Excellent as always.
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Date: 1/8/2024 3:37:00 AM
- A deeply emotional poem, Victor - hugs
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Date: 1/8/2024 2:44:00 AM
Wow!! In the depths of somewhere, is where you will be found. I hope you surface soon. Thanks for sharing these lines with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Date: 1/8/2024 2:16:00 AM
In the big scheme of things we are but tiny specks in the wonders of creation. Hopefully one day the mysteries of the universe will be revealed to us. Well written Victor. Tom
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Date: 1/8/2024 1:55:00 AM
Gosh, this poem took me on an evocative journey, dear Victor! What a remarkable scene you've presented here wherein, those spaces of vacuum in universe still echo a unique silence which has its own voice..Those planets sing their own symphony, if we try and hear.. We can ever listen the heartbeats of our own souls..A deeply profound, thoughtful and meaningful write this is..Absolutely brilliant with intriguing wordplay and an incredible flow as well.. Sending you many best wishes & light ~ a FAV
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Date: 1/8/2024 1:43:00 AM
There is music in those spheres that spin and glow, A deep write Victor
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Date: 1/8/2024 12:43:00 AM
We are here onto your vast space guided by your sparkling words! We can hear the music of your verse that leaks the silence of your universe! What a stunning setting you have displayed, Victor! So much enjoyed reading your amazing poetry! Hope you are relishing in the wonder of words.. stay always safe and blessed. Best regards.
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Date: 1/8/2024 12:40:00 AM
What a wonderful execution of an original idea! Reading it is like an out of body experience. Bravo!
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Date: 1/8/2024 12:07:00 AM
There is always a sense of intrigue to your poems, dear Victor; I always mull over them, looking for the hidden meaning; you are a Master at those famous twists. As always you never disappoint...Hugs
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Date: 1/7/2024 10:56:00 PM
An intriguing and lovely verse, which brings to mind the vast majesty of the universe, and the mystery and wonder of the spirit.
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