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Liquor Lips

Poured from purloined bottles of poison, Whose drip is but a crimson crash, Of whisky washing my lips which moisten, With a humid dew of drowning cash. From the pocket pours the absinthe green; Tourmaline trash tossed atop the torrent, Which washes over with drunken mondegreen, Slurred words whispered with neither wish nor warrant. To drown in glass filled with vicious avoirdupois, Whose weight is watched by the wrap of a whipping boy, Is but death by pint and shots of strife, Sipped away in a sinking sea of life. Spare me of my liquor lips, Whose tongue-licked wish is sips, Of that which drowns me drunk, As I, the captain, sink in a ship I've sunk.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 6/12/2017 1:50:00 PM
Intoxicating write dear! enjoyed ;) xomo
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Date: 6/3/2017 4:36:00 PM
Wow wow wow! excellent write Brendan. What a good taste for words. A seven!
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B. Joseph Fitzsimons
Date: 6/5/2017 8:01:00 PM
Thank you Kunda, that's very kind of you
Date: 5/11/2017 11:29:00 AM
Hi Brendan , great write , but don't show this to anyone going to AA meetings it is to tasty :)))
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B. Joseph Fitzsimons
Date: 6/5/2017 8:03:00 PM
Thanks Niall!

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