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Liquid Fantasy

cold to the touch of warm sandy toes - ebb and flow of liquid fantasy. coolness climaxes at her sculpted shoulders. coral hair, like seagrass, floats. shapely legs morph. her tail breaches, slaps salty air, then plunges into the deep. 4/13/2022 Line Gauthier’s Bite Size Poem no 42

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Date: 4/13/2022 7:28:00 PM
You had breathing heavily through my spout there, ma'am! A whale of a tale! Super write, Kim. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/13/2022 7:52:00 PM
;) Thought you would like!
Date: 4/13/2022 5:39:00 PM
So full of lovely images.... ! An outstanding work...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/13/2022 5:42:00 PM
Thank you, dear Valsa!
Date: 4/13/2022 3:41:00 PM
ooohhhh, magical and delightful.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/13/2022 5:42:00 PM
Thank you, my friend !
Date: 4/13/2022 9:47:00 AM
Utterly delightful Kim. So sensory, mystical, touched by a breath of fantasy. Best wishes for the contest. Happy Easter my friend.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/13/2022 11:26:00 AM
Glad you liked it! :) Happy Easter, Sam!
Date: 4/13/2022 9:17:00 AM
Hi Kim, I found your bite-size poem to be well-written and mysterious. Best wishes in the contest. Have a nice day-Alexis
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/13/2022 11:26:00 AM
Thank you, Alexis!
Date: 4/13/2022 7:22:00 AM
Your bite size poem is packed with images. Best for a win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/13/2022 8:24:00 AM
Thank you! :)

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