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Liquid Fantasy

cold to the touch of warm sandy toes -
     ebb and flow of liquid fantasy.
coolness climaxes at her sculpted shoulders.
 coral hair,      like seagrass, floats.
shapely legs morph.    her tail breaches,
slaps salty air,     then plunges into the deep.

4/13/2022
Line Gauthier’s Bite Size Poem no 42

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Gershon Wolf Date: 4/13/2022 7:28:00 PM You had breathing heavily through my spout there, ma'am! A whale of a tale! Super write, Kim. :) Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/13/2022 7:52:00 PM ;) Thought you would like!

Valsa George Date: 4/13/2022 5:39:00 PM So full of lovely images.... ! An outstanding work... Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/13/2022 5:42:00 PM Thank you, dear Valsa!

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/13/2022 3:41:00 PM ooohhhh, magical and delightful. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/13/2022 5:42:00 PM Thank you, my friend !

Sam Kauffman Date: 4/13/2022 9:47:00 AM Utterly delightful Kim. So sensory, mystical, touched by a breath of fantasy. Best wishes for the contest. Happy Easter my friend. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/13/2022 11:26:00 AM Glad you liked it! :) Happy Easter, Sam!

Alexis Y. Date: 4/13/2022 9:17:00 AM Hi Kim, I found your bite-size poem to be well-written and mysterious. Best wishes in the contest. Have a nice day-Alexis Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/13/2022 11:26:00 AM Thank you, Alexis!

Victor Buhagiar Date: 4/13/2022 7:22:00 AM Your bite size poem is packed with images. Best for a win. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/13/2022 8:24:00 AM Thank you! :)