Lips On Lips

if?,
per chance we happened to touch
your hand barely feeling mine

a wisp of air disappeared drew us near
so skin on skin were we

a tornado spun us face to face
and the mildest of earthquakes
shook us and locked us
!lips on lips!, 

if there were a heat wave
drove us crazy, and we
you and i, actually kissed
passionately!

would you?
would you be terribly angry?
if!

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Date: 4/2/2015 7:58:00 PM
Thanks, Maurice, it's a big site, I'm glad you see the inner demons of others. That's one of the reasons, I'm not on here as much as I was at one time. I enjoyed watching the trolls take over... LOL, and nothing happen... :) They left too... I try hard not to be as active... But this week, I am going to make a mark... LOL... Hello, EASTER SUNDAY!!! I'm taking over a certain spot someone else kept warm for me... LOL.... LINDA
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Date: 4/2/2015 7:46:00 PM
I wish I was incredible.... Maurice, you are too kind. If I was half the poet everyone else is on this site, maybe I wouldn't be the most hated on here. I think, most poets hate me because they think my poetry does not deserve to be on top. sometimes I agree... LINDA
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 4/2/2015 7:51:00 PM
That is just people being petty. Your art is where it belongs and you are more than gracious about it. I believe you are loved and admired by many. Jealousy comes with the territory. Having grown up in theatre and as a director I have seen this all too often people attacking the best only because they are the best. Love You Always, Armand
Date: 4/2/2015 7:10:00 PM
He does, I also mentioned to him, how you are one of my favorite poets. I also told him you are the most creative poet on this site... And, that is the truth... you rock...LINDA
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 4/2/2015 7:30:00 PM
I have so much respect and admiration for your talent as a poet. I could never write as well as you do. You an incredible talent!
Date: 3/21/2015 5:34:00 PM
I'M HAVING A NICE DAY.... my fiance, just made me smile... So now my tagging friend... How are you. How was your vacation?...PD
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 3/21/2015 5:50:00 PM
I am so happy for you Linda, I hope he makes you smile as often as you please. You deserve only the best!
Date: 9/10/2014 7:48:00 PM
If, LOL.... IF, she really likes you, she'd be looking forward to all the disasters above...LOL... The Poet Destroyer was here, TAG
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/10/2014 8:10:00 PM
HAHAHAHA.......HAHAHAHA!! Never thought of all the disasters.
Date: 9/10/2014 7:46:00 PM
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/10/2014 8:08:00 PM
Ok!
Date: 8/29/2014 10:02:00 AM
hmm...you had me thinking here. this is great, Maurice!
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 8/29/2014 11:07:00 AM
now you got me thinking. i always love your visits.
Date: 8/29/2014 6:52:00 AM
Oh what a thought Maurice - 'weather' I would do it or not - who knows great write:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/29/2014 11:17:00 AM
Oh dear i only gave the poem a 7:-) Good looks fade but humour never dies - hence the reason i hide behind my avatar LOL.Hugs Jan xx
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 8/29/2014 11:12:00 AM
hahahaha. very witty. you have no idea how similar our sense of humor is. i rate this comment 8 out of 7.
Date: 8/29/2014 12:22:00 AM
Great write Maurice .....Seren
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 8/29/2014 11:13:00 AM
i love your poetry thank you for dropping in.
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