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Lips In Springtime

~~~~~........~~~~~ spring wafts on alphabets of fresh lips when meters string blushed phrases of kisses perfumed dusk- flesh rising upward downward on moon crest sighing like peach bouquets brewing nights’ homemade breaths all rights reserved © ..................................... (( for Michael Falotico's " Nonet Me A Spring Kiss ))

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/21/2011 7:03:00 AM

So appreciate your luv and encouraging words Nette my dear friend... how are things on the other side of the World today?

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/20/2011 11:55:00 AM

Whatever is inspiring you to create such beauty, I wish you could share it with us, Nette. Awesome, romantic poem! Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Gert W. Knop

Date: 3/20/2011 9:06:00 AM

Great imagery and passion, Nette! Have a great week! And best of luck in Michael's contest!...Gert:)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/20/2011 7:57:00 AM

Very sensuous write on the spring's kiss, nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/20/2011 7:18:00 AM

Happy Sunday Nette dear .. hope all is well and bright and Sunday is a delight for u luv..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/20/2011 4:41:00 AM

Am lost in the delight of your words Nette dear friend.. flows like a soft elegant wave of luv.. my friend.. and good luck in Michael's cool contest.. he willl surely be dreamy over these lines..luv.. happy Sunday..

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 3/20/2011 4:31:00 AM

what can I say that I haven't said before nette? such a unique turn of phrase you have, such striking unexpected imagery, just beautiful...

Kash Poet

Date: 3/20/2011 12:30:00 AM

wonderful lines here'Alphabets of fresh lips'-nice use of metaphors!Goodluck nette in the contest-kashinath

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/19/2011 11:12:00 PM

So metaphorical, Nette. I sure love those "blushed phrases of kisses perfumed dusk"!! good luck. I am seeing nothing but excellence from all the entries!